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Post by wonderdog on Apr 14, 2008 15:13:15 GMT -5
Chapter 1. Belladonnas arrival It was dead night. All was still and quiet. Nothing was moving except for the shadows of the moon and the animals oaming in the night such as foxes, owls, hedgehogs and bats. Nothing was visable and all was still. Until.....BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A huge green vortex exploded onto the scene twisting and turning, swirling and spitting. It didnt stop. All the animals in the night ran for thier dear lifes. Then a huge purple figure came bursting out. This only meant one thing. BELLADONNA HAD ESCAPED FROM THE OTHER ETERNITY!!!!!!!! "AH!!!!!! After three whole years I am freed!!!!!!!! Time to conqer the Earth!!!!!!!" she cried into the night sky. Now the other eternity could drive you up the wall. Infact it drives you mad!!! Nuts!!!! Bonkers!!!! She laughed mentally and ran down San Fracsisco street. She slowly slowed down. She relized, even though she was mental, she had no idea where she was going. She stopped all together. "Hem...how shall I do it???" Belladonna asked herself. She looked all around. The other eternity was rumbling and she could feel it. "Hem I beter rum. Hem hem. Haha! HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!" Belladonna went into a mental laugh again. "I know!!!!" Belladonna screeched. Her hair was even crazier. Frizzy and torn at. As her fur was the same. There were patches missing of it. Anyway she continued to run. She ran down towards Carfaces house. She knew where she was going now!!!! (Opening song comes on-Britany spears~Break the ice) Chapter 2. In the flea bite café. Charlie strethed out in the sunlight. His brown fur glowing in the sunshine. "Itch???" He yawned. "You there???" He was sleeping on the sofa bed in the Flae bite. "Yea Charlie I'm here" Itchys voice said. "Itch I can hear you but I cant see you" Charlie said. Itchys head pops down making Charlie yelp. "YAHHH!!!!" Charlie yelled.. "Wow Charlie! You would think that you'd just had a heart attack" Itchy said, his tounge dangling down. "Well I just did Itch!!!!" Charlie snapped. "Oh sorry Charlie" Itchy said. "Hey boys" Sasha said coming through the door. "Hey Sasha" Charlie said. "Dont even think about it Barkin" Sasha said not even looking behind her. "Oh baby come on" Charlie cooed. "Your a sweet bit of candy to all eyes" Sasha picked up her ears. "Your so cute and pretty. And every boy would be lucky to have you. I want to be that lucky one" Charlie went on in a fake soppy voice. "Oh Charlie!!! You wonderful pooch!!! You will be that lucky one!!!" Sasha said putting her paw to her heart. "Lunch date today at twelve???" Charlie said winking. "Of corse!!!" said Sasha. She walked on and stopped and turned. "Oh and Charlie??? Dont stand me up" Sasha said. "I wont honey" Charlie said. She walked off and Charlie stopped the soppy talk. "Ta-da!!!!" he said to Itchy. "Wow!!!" Itchy said. "How do I do it???" Charlie asked himself proudly. "Search me" Itchy said. Then a farmiliar grunt came. "Oh no. Its Carface" Charlie moaned. "Hello all you mutts" Carface said coming through the door, followed by Killer. "What do you want Carface??" Sasha said annoyed. "I just came to collect my monthly loans" Carface smirked. "Oh no. Its only been two weeks" Charlie said. Carface ingnored him completly. "Now miss Sasha you owe Carface fifteen bones" Killer said reading his notebook. "FIFTEEN!!!!!!! No way I only borrowed five!!!!" Sasha yelled. "Look honey. If you cant pay the loans then...." Carface said. "Look Carface. Go and take a hike" Charlie snapped. "Hey mister thirty bones" Killer said. "THRITY??!!" Charlie yelled. "If you want proof" Killer holding out his notebook. "What the...NO WAY!!!!!!!!!" Charlie shouted. "Fine!!!!" Carface snapped. "You leave me no choice!!!!" "What are you possibly going to do???" Charlie asked laughing. "Your magic dog whistle has been melted by your boss who is in the other eternity." "Well...ummm...I could....I will..." Carface said. He relized he had no real plan. "Ok you got me!!!! But I will be back" Carface snapped. "Oh scared" Charlie said sarcastically. Carface grolwed and walked out the doors of the flea bite. "Good ridance" Itchy said. "Back gotcha" Sasha said turning the open sign on the door. She went to work. Chapter 3. The news. It turned twelve o'clock and Saha and Charlie headed of to thier lunch date. "Wow Charlie!!!! You acctually showed up!!!!!!" Sasha said. "I told you" Charlie said. "Well I didnt believe you at frist" Sasha admitted. "Who would" Gerta sblack personed. "Hey!!!" Charlie snapped. Itchy and Gerta just laughed at the truth. Charlie and Sasha went to the table next to the t.v where they would show football, music videos and so one. "Hey Gerta. Switch on the news" Itchy said. Gerta grabbed to remote and flicked on the news. "Now this just in" the reporter dog was saying " A mad dog was spotted on the street only last night. She was mental as I said. And not jut her personality!!!! Her looks!!!! She is purple with a black motorbike jacket and a spiked collar." Charlie heard this while drinking. He spit it out yelling "WHAT??!!" But it went all over Sasha. "CHARLIE BARKIN!!!" Sasha cried. "Wha...Oh sasha!!!! I'm so sorry but did you hear that???!!!" Charlie shouted. "Oh dear. What has happened???" said Annabelle turning up in the miorror. "Charlie just blew it" Sasha yelled at him. "I'm sorry about that sasha but...there was really bad news on the news!!!!" Charlie cried. "Well what??" Itchy said. "Well......BELLADONNA HAS ESCAPED FROM THE OTHER ETERNITY!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. All of the café went quiet. Then.....panic sturck in the whole café!!!!! "Guys..guys...GUYS!!!!!" Sasha yelled. Everyone stopped. "Annabelle what shall we do???" Sasha asked. "Hem...let me see...ah yes!!!! Here is a miracle dog tag!!!! Use it well" Annabelle said. "Wait arent you coming???" Itchy asked. "No it is up to you" Annablle said. She dissappered. "Hey!!! Annabelle!!!!! Wait come back!!!" Charlie yelled. But she was long gone. Chapter 4. The plan. Carface was sleeping in his bed. As was Killer but he wasnt in the room. The faint sound of hysterical laughing. It woke Carface. Hey!!! Whos there?" He called out into the empty room. It came again. "I can hear you!!! your caught!!!! get out here now!!!!" Carface yelled. It got louder and louder, closer and closer. "I can hear you!!!!" Carface shouted. Killer burst in. "Was that you??" "Ummm....I dont...think so" Killer said confused. "Then who was it. "IT WAS ME!!!!!!!!" a voice yelled out. "AHHHHH!!!!!!" Killer and Carface cried. A huge black shadow came floating in through the window and the black faded showing the farmilar evil face of...BELLADONNA!!!! "Boss???" Carface asked. "Yes!!!!! It is me!!!!!!" Belladonna cried. "I thought you were gone forever!!!!" Carface cried. "Ah me too!!!! But never underestimate the power of Belladonna!!!!!!" Belladonna cried mentally. "But how did you do it???" Killer asked. "Ah!!!! I thought they had me locked up forever!!!!! But as they took me out of my cage for some air outside I tugged free and ran like the wind!!!!!" Belladonna cried out. Carface and Killer looked at each other. "Now I shall tell you my scheming evil plan!!!!!" Belladonna shouted. "I shall make a divice that will take me to the center of th earth!!!!! And I shall put out a hypnoisis tone that will reach all human and animal ears!!!! And they will all follow my demands!!!!" Belladonna yelled. "Wow boss!!! Excellent idea!!!" Carface cried out. "Yes but I cant do it alone. I must get help. I will get all my minoins again!!!! And some of the prisoiners from the other eternity!!!!!" Belladonna said rubbing her paws together. "LETS GO!!!!" She spread her powerful wings. Unfortunatly her wings had holes in them. "Rats!!!" she yelled. She made a healing ball and rolled it on both her wings. "Ah that is better!!!!" She cried. And she grabbed Carface and Killer and flew off. TO BE CONTINUED.............. I am of on school on wednesday so I shall write the rest tomorrow night if possible. Night everyone!!!!!! -wonderdog.
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Post by newshadow777 on Apr 14, 2008 17:43:35 GMT -5
Chapter 1. Belladonnas arrival It was dead night. All was still and quiet. Nothing was moving except for the shadows of the moon and the animals oaming in the night such as foxes, owls, hedgehogs and bats. Nothing was visable and all was still. Until.....BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A huge green vortex exploded onto the scene twisting and turning, swirling and spitting. It didnt stop. All the animals in the night ran for thier dear lifes. Then a huge purple figure came bursting out. This only meant one thing. BELLADONNA HAD ESCAPED FROM THE OTHER ETERNITY!!!!!!!! "AH!!!!!! After three whole years I am freed!!!!!!!! Time to conqer the Earth!!!!!!!" she cried into the night sky. Now the other eternity could drive you up the wall. Infact it drives you mad!!! Nuts!!!! Bonkers!!!! She laughed mentally and ran down San Fracsisco street. She slowly slowed down. She relized, even though she was mental, she had no idea where she was going. She stopped all together. "Hem...how shall I do it???" Belladonna asked herself. She looked all around. The other eternity was rumbling and she could feel it. "Hem I beter rum. Hem hem. Haha! HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!" Belladonna went into a mental laugh again. "I know!!!!" Belladonna screeched. Her hair was even crazier. Frizzy and torn at. As her fur was the same. There were patches missing of it. Anyway she continued to run. She ran down towards Carfaces house. She knew where she was going now!!!! (Opening song comes on-Britany spears~Break the ice) Chapter 2. In the flea bite café. Charlie strethed out in the sunlight. His brown fur glowing in the sunshine. "Itch???" He yawned. "You there???" He was sleeping on the sofa bed in the Flae bite. "Yea Charlie I'm here" Itchys voice said. "Itch I can hear you but I cant see you" Charlie said. Itchys head pops down making Charlie yelp. "YAHHH!!!!" Charlie yelled.. "Wow Charlie! You would think that you'd just had a heart attack" Itchy said, his tounge dangling down. "Well I just did Itch!!!!" Charlie snapped. "Oh sorry Charlie" Itchy said. "Hey boys" Sasha said coming through the door. "Hey Sasha" Charlie said. "Dont even think about it Barkin" Sasha said not even looking behind her. "Oh baby come on" Charlie cooed. "Your a sweet bit of candy to all eyes" Sasha picked up her ears. "Your so cute and pretty. And every boy would be lucky to have you. I want to be that lucky one" Charlie went on in a fake soppy voice. "Oh Charlie!!! You wonderful pooch!!! You will be that lucky one!!!" Sasha said putting her paw to her heart. "Lunch date today at twelve???" Charlie said winking. "Of corse!!!" said Sasha. She walked on and stopped and turned. "Oh and Charlie??? Dont stand me up" Sasha said. "I wont honey" Charlie said. She walked off and Charlie stopped the soppy talk. "Ta-da!!!!" he said to Itchy. "Wow!!!" Itchy said. "How do I do it???" Charlie asked himself proudly. "Search me" Itchy said. Then a farmiliar grunt came. "Oh no. Its Carface" Charlie moaned. "Hello all you mutts" Carface said coming through the door, followed by Killer. "What do you want Carface??" Sasha said annoyed. "I just came to collect my monthly loans" Carface smirked. "Oh no. Its only been two weeks" Charlie said. Carface ingnored him completly. "Now miss Sasha you owe Carface fifteen bones" Killer said reading his notebook. "FIFTEEN!!!!!!! No way I only borrowed five!!!!" Sasha yelled. "Look honey. If you cant pay the loans then...." Carface said. "Look Carface. Go and take a hike" Charlie snapped. "Hey mister thirty bones" Killer said. "THRITY??!!" Charlie yelled. "If you want proof" Killer holding out his notebook. "What the...NO WAY!!!!!!!!!" Charlie shouted. "Fine!!!!" Carface snapped. "You leave me no choice!!!!" "What are you possibly going to do???" Charlie asked laughing. "Your magic dog whistle has been melted by your boss who is in the other eternity." "Well...ummm...I could....I will..." Carface said. He relized he had no real plan. "Ok you got me!!!! But I will be back" Carface snapped. "Oh scared" Charlie said sarcastically. Carface grolwed and walked out the doors of the flea bite. "Good ridance" Itchy said. "Back gotcha" Sasha said turning the open sign on the door. She went to work. Chapter 3. The news. It turned twelve o'clock and Saha and Charlie headed of to thier lunch date. "Wow Charlie!!!! You acctually showed up!!!!!!" Sasha said. "I told you" Charlie said. "Well I didnt believe you at frist" Sasha admitted. "Who would" Gerta sblack personed. "Hey!!!" Charlie snapped. Itchy and Gerta just laughed at the truth. Charlie and Sasha went to the table next to the t.v where they would show football, music videos and so one. "Hey Gerta. Switch on the news" Itchy said. Gerta grabbed to remote and flicked on the news. "Now this just in" the reporter dog was saying " A mad dog was spotted on the street only last night. She was mental as I said. And not jut her personality!!!! Her looks!!!! She is purple with a black motorbike jacket and a spiked collar." Charlie heard this while drinking. He spit it out yelling "WHAT??!!" But it went all over Sasha. "CHARLIE BARKIN!!!" Sasha cried. "Wha...Oh sasha!!!! I'm so sorry but did you hear that???!!!" Charlie shouted. "Oh dear. What has happened???" said Annabelle turning up in the miorror. "Charlie just blew it" Sasha yelled at him. "I'm sorry about that sasha but...there was really bad news on the news!!!!" Charlie cried. "Well what??" Itchy said. "Well......BELLADONNA HAS ESCAPED FROM THE OTHER ETERNITY!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. All of the café went quiet. Then.....panic sturck in the whole café!!!!! "Guys..guys...GUYS!!!!!" Sasha yelled. Everyone stopped. "Annabelle what shall we do???" Sasha asked. "Hem...let me see...ah yes!!!! Here is a miracle dog tag!!!! Use it well" Annabelle said. "Wait arent you coming???" Itchy asked. "No it is up to you" Annablle said. She dissappered. "Hey!!! Annabelle!!!!! Wait come back!!!" Charlie yelled. But she was long gone. Chapter 4. The plan. Carface was sleeping in his bed. As was Killer but he wasnt in the room. The faint sound of hysterical laughing. It woke Carface. Hey!!! Whos there?" He called out into the empty room. It came again. "I can hear you!!! your caught!!!! get out here now!!!!" Carface yelled. It got louder and louder, closer and closer. "I can hear you!!!!" Carface shouted. Killer burst in. "Was that you??" "Ummm....I dont...think so" Killer said confused. "Then who was it. "IT WAS ME!!!!!!!!" a voice yelled out. "AHHHHH!!!!!!" Killer and Carface cried. A huge black shadow came floating in through the window and the black faded showing the farmilar evil face of...BELLADONNA!!!! "Boss???" Carface asked. "Yes!!!!! It is me!!!!!!" Belladonna cried. "I thought you were gone forever!!!!" Carface cried. "Ah me too!!!! But never underestimate the power of Belladonna!!!!!!" Belladonna cried mentally. "But how did you do it???" Killer asked. "Ah!!!! I thought they had me locked up forever!!!!! But as they took me out of my cage for some air outside I tugged free and ran like the wind!!!!!" Belladonna cried out. Carface and Killer looked at each other. "Now I shall tell you my scheming evil plan!!!!!" Belladonna shouted. "I shall make a divice that will take me to the center of th earth!!!!! And I shall put out a hypnoisis tone that will reach all human and animal ears!!!! And they will all follow my demands!!!!" Belladonna yelled. "Wow boss!!! Excellent idea!!!" Carface cried out. "Yes but I cant do it alone. I must get help. I will get all my minoins again!!!! And some of the prisoiners from the other eternity!!!!!" Belladonna said rubbing her paws together. "LETS GO!!!!" She spread her powerful wings. Unfortunatly her wings had holes in them. "Rats!!!" she yelled. She made a healing ball and rolled it on both her wings. "Ah that is better!!!!" She cried. And she grabbed Carface and Killer and flew off. TO BE CONTINUED.............. I am of on school on wednesday so I shall write the rest tomorrow night if possible. Night everyone!!!!!! -wonderdog. My god i love your story
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 15, 2008 10:46:45 GMT -5
Chapter 1. Belladonnas arrival It was dead night. All was still and quiet. Nothing was moving except for the shadows of the moon and the animals oaming in the night such as foxes, owls, hedgehogs and bats. Nothing was visable and all was still. Until.....BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A huge green vortex exploded onto the scene twisting and turning, swirling and spitting. It didnt stop. All the animals in the night ran for thier dear lifes. Then a huge purple figure came bursting out. This only meant one thing. BELLADONNA HAD ESCAPED FROM THE OTHER ETERNITY!!!!!!!! "AH!!!!!! After three whole years I am freed!!!!!!!! Time to conqer the Earth!!!!!!!" she cried into the night sky. Now the other eternity could drive you up the wall. Infact it drives you mad!!! Nuts!!!! Bonkers!!!! She laughed mentally and ran down San Fracsisco street. She slowly slowed down. She relized, even though she was mental, she had no idea where she was going. She stopped all together. "Hem...how shall I do it???" Belladonna asked herself. She looked all around. The other eternity was rumbling and she could feel it. "Hem I beter rum. Hem hem. Haha! HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!" Belladonna went into a mental laugh again. "I know!!!!" Belladonna screeched. Her hair was even crazier. Frizzy and torn at. As her fur was the same. There were patches missing of it. Anyway she continued to run. She ran down towards Carfaces house. She knew where she was going now!!!! (Opening song comes on-Britany spears~Break the ice) Chapter 2. In the flea bite café. Charlie strethed out in the sunlight. His brown fur glowing in the sunshine. "Itch???" He yawned. "You there???" He was sleeping on the sofa bed in the Flae bite. "Yea Charlie I'm here" Itchys voice said. "Itch I can hear you but I cant see you" Charlie said. Itchys head pops down making Charlie yelp. "YAHHH!!!!" Charlie yelled.. "Wow Charlie! You would think that you'd just had a heart attack" Itchy said, his tounge dangling down. "Well I just did Itch!!!!" Charlie snapped. "Oh sorry Charlie" Itchy said. "Hey boys" Sasha said coming through the door. "Hey Sasha" Charlie said. "Dont even think about it Barkin" Sasha said not even looking behind her. "Oh baby come on" Charlie cooed. "Your a sweet bit of candy to all eyes" Sasha picked up her ears. "Your so cute and pretty. And every boy would be lucky to have you. I want to be that lucky one" Charlie went on in a fake soppy voice. "Oh Charlie!!! You wonderful pooch!!! You will be that lucky one!!!" Sasha said putting her paw to her heart. "Lunch date today at twelve???" Charlie said winking. "Of corse!!!" said Sasha. She walked on and stopped and turned. "Oh and Charlie??? Dont stand me up" Sasha said. "I wont honey" Charlie said. She walked off and Charlie stopped the soppy talk. "Ta-da!!!!" he said to Itchy. "Wow!!!" Itchy said. "How do I do it???" Charlie asked himself proudly. "Search me" Itchy said. Then a farmiliar grunt came. "Oh no. Its Carface" Charlie moaned. "Hello all you mutts" Carface said coming through the door, followed by Killer. "What do you want Carface??" Sasha said annoyed. "I just came to collect my monthly loans" Carface smirked. "Oh no. Its only been two weeks" Charlie said. Carface ingnored him completly. "Now miss Sasha you owe Carface fifteen bones" Killer said reading his notebook. "FIFTEEN!!!!!!! No way I only borrowed five!!!!" Sasha yelled. "Look honey. If you cant pay the loans then...." Carface said. "Look Carface. Go and take a hike" Charlie snapped. "Hey mister thirty bones" Killer said. "THRITY??!!" Charlie yelled. "If you want proof" Killer holding out his notebook. "What the...NO WAY!!!!!!!!!" Charlie shouted. "Fine!!!!" Carface snapped. "You leave me no choice!!!!" "What are you possibly going to do???" Charlie asked laughing. "Your magic dog whistle has been melted by your boss who is in the other eternity." "Well...ummm...I could....I will..." Carface said. He relized he had no real plan. "Ok you got me!!!! But I will be back" Carface snapped. "Oh scared" Charlie said sarcastically. Carface grolwed and walked out the doors of the flea bite. "Good ridance" Itchy said. "Back gotcha" Sasha said turning the open sign on the door. She went to work. Chapter 3. The news. It turned twelve o'clock and Saha and Charlie headed of to thier lunch date. "Wow Charlie!!!! You acctually showed up!!!!!!" Sasha said. "I told you" Charlie said. "Well I didnt believe you at frist" Sasha admitted. "Who would" Gerta sblack personed. "Hey!!!" Charlie snapped. Itchy and Gerta just laughed at the truth. Charlie and Sasha went to the table next to the t.v where they would show football, music videos and so one. "Hey Gerta. Switch on the news" Itchy said. Gerta grabbed to remote and flicked on the news. "Now this just in" the reporter dog was saying " A mad dog was spotted on the street only last night. She was mental as I said. And not jut her personality!!!! Her looks!!!! She is purple with a black motorbike jacket and a spiked collar." Charlie heard this while drinking. He spit it out yelling "WHAT??!!" But it went all over Sasha. "CHARLIE BARKIN!!!" Sasha cried. "Wha...Oh sasha!!!! I'm so sorry but did you hear that???!!!" Charlie shouted. "Oh dear. What has happened???" said Annabelle turning up in the miorror. "Charlie just blew it" Sasha yelled at him. "I'm sorry about that sasha but...there was really bad news on the news!!!!" Charlie cried. "Well what??" Itchy said. "Well......BELLADONNA HAS ESCAPED FROM THE OTHER ETERNITY!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. All of the café went quiet. Then.....panic sturck in the whole café!!!!! "Guys..guys...GUYS!!!!!" Sasha yelled. Everyone stopped. "Annabelle what shall we do???" Sasha asked. "Hem...let me see...ah yes!!!! Here is a miracle dog tag!!!! Use it well" Annabelle said. "Wait arent you coming???" Itchy asked. "No it is up to you" Annablle said. She dissappered. "Hey!!! Annabelle!!!!! Wait come back!!!" Charlie yelled. But she was long gone. Chapter 4. The plan. Carface was sleeping in his bed. As was Killer but he wasnt in the room. The faint sound of hysterical laughing. It woke Carface. Hey!!! Whos there?" He called out into the empty room. It came again. "I can hear you!!! your caught!!!! get out here now!!!!" Carface yelled. It got louder and louder, closer and closer. "I can hear you!!!!" Carface shouted. Killer burst in. "Was that you??" "Ummm....I dont...think so" Killer said confused. "Then who was it. "IT WAS ME!!!!!!!!" a voice yelled out. "AHHHHH!!!!!!" Killer and Carface cried. A huge black shadow came floating in through the window and the black faded showing the farmilar evil face of...BELLADONNA!!!! "Boss???" Carface asked. "Yes!!!!! It is me!!!!!!" Belladonna cried. "I thought you were gone forever!!!!" Carface cried. "Ah me too!!!! But never underestimate the power of Belladonna!!!!!!" Belladonna cried mentally. "But how did you do it???" Killer asked. "Ah!!!! I thought they had me locked up forever!!!!! But as they took me out of my cage for some air outside I tugged free and ran like the wind!!!!!" Belladonna cried out. Carface and Killer looked at each other. "Now I shall tell you my scheming evil plan!!!!!" Belladonna shouted. "I shall make a divice that will take me to the center of th earth!!!!! And I shall put out a hypnoisis tone that will reach all human and animal ears!!!! And they will all follow my demands!!!!" Belladonna yelled. "Wow boss!!! Excellent idea!!!" Carface cried out. "Yes but I cant do it alone. I must get help. I will get all my minoins again!!!! And some of the prisoiners from the other eternity!!!!!" Belladonna said rubbing her paws together. "LETS GO!!!!" She spread her powerful wings. Unfortunatly her wings had holes in them. "Rats!!!" she yelled. She made a healing ball and rolled it on both her wings. "Ah that is better!!!!" She cried. And she grabbed Carface and Killer and flew off. TO BE CONTINUED.............. I am of on school on wednesday so I shall write the rest tomorrow night if possible. Night everyone!!!!!! -wonderdog. My god i love your story Thank you. What do you like best about it???
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 15, 2008 12:39:15 GMT -5
Chapter 5. Charlie strikes a plan. "Guys!!!! I thought of the most schemeing plan there has ever been!!!!" Charlie cried. "What??!!" Sasha cried out. "What is it???" "Well.....I drew out a couple of plans that were pretty cool but this one stands out!!!! I found a way to use this tag to make us....SUPER HEROES!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. "Genius!!!!!" Sasha called out. "Awsome plan Charlie!!!!" "Oh tag??? I little bit of magic if you may" Charlie said. A huge beam of light came up and then just fell back into the tag. "Well???" Charlie said looking at both his amigoes. "Well...I dont feel any...different" Itchy said. "Me either" Sasha said. "What??" Charlie said feeling depressed. "I'm sorry Charlie" Itchy said. He jumped up on his seat and surprisingly didnt come down. "Hey!!!" Itchy cried. "I cant I come down??" "Itchy...your...your flying!!!!" Charlie cried. "My gosh.....I AM FLYING!!!!" Itchy yelled with glee. "I can fly!!!! I can fly!!!!!" Itchy yelled hysterically. I'm flying I'm flying!!!!" Itchy shouted doing loopty loops to test his miracle. "What can I do???" Sahsa asked. "Maybe you cann freeze time??? Here!!!! Stop this!!!" Charlie said pouring rootbeer over Sasha. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!" Sasha cried. But this was no ordinary scream. It sent out super sonic booms!!! "Hey!!!! I have a sonic screams!!!!!" Sasha cried. "I think we knew that when we flew through the air" Charlie said. "Oh Charlie I am...not sorry!!!! Look at my poor hair!!!!" Sasha yelled. "Hey what can I do???" Charlie asked. He tried to levatate things. He tried to go invisable. He tried to read minds. Nothing happened. "GRR!!!" Charlie cried. He was so angery he felt something inside him. Something odd. He marched over to the mini sofa van and...lifted it straight up!!!!! "CHARLIE!!!!! You have super strenth!!!!!" Itchy cried out. "YES!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. (As they test thier powers the song Jonas brothers song~Kids of the future comes on) "Lets go and find out those plans!!!" Charlie said. Chapter 6. Super Villans and super heroes. Itchy peeped up through Carfaces window. Belladonna was there. As she went trough the plan again once more they set off. Itchy listened to the whole thing. "And they pull it off at mid night" Itchy said telling his pals the plan. "But...but...Its midnight in....FIVE MINUTES!!!!!" Sasha yelled looking at the clock. "Well why are we here staring at the clock!!!!! Lets move!!!!!!!" Charlie yelled. Him and his best mates ran (Well all except Itchy who flew) towards Carfaces house until they reached a huge hole. "Whoa" the three said in unisoin. "Well...I think they went down there" Charlie said. "Are you kidding me??!!" Sasha said looking down the humognus hole. "You cant make me go down there!!!!" "Come on Sasha. Just picture it as a huge slidy thingy" Charlie said, looking a bit tooken a back that he was going down there himself. "I'm not scared!!!!" Itchy said proudly. "Well duh!!! You can fly!!!" Sasha said. "Look come on" Charlie said. He took a deep breath and jumped down the hole. "AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!" Charlie cried going down the hole. His yelp got softer and softer as he went deeper. Itchy went next. "WWWWEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!" Itchy cried going down. His yelp for fun was also fading. "Aw. Well it couldnt get worse" Sasha groaned. She jumped down also. "YYYYYAAAAAHHHH!!!!!" she screamed. The hole seemed to go on for ever. Then the heat got closer. It was warm. Then hot. Then scroching. Then boiling!!!! "We're getting closer to the core of the earth!!!!" Charlie yelled up towards the hole hoping the other would hear him. The landed. "OOF!!!!!" Charlie yelped, hitting the ground. YEA!!!" Itchy said with glee coming out the end of the hole. "OW!!!!!" Sasha cried out, smacking on the ground. "Well well well Killer. Look who it is" Carface said smirking downn at them. "Carface" Charlie moaned. "YES!!!! It is me!!!!" Carface said. "And now...Itchy are you flying???" "Yes...yes I am" Itchy said proudly. "Well....anyway.... now to meet the host of our little party" Carface said taken a back by Itchys flight. Then a shadow came up. A mental laugh. It was only one person. "BELLADONNA!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. Chapter 7. The final battle. "HAHAHA!!!!!" Belladonna laughed. "IT IS I!!!!!!!!!!" "I thought we took care of you??? How did you escape???" Itchy said. "AH!!! I thought they had me!! I thought I would die a couple of hours later. I thought this every day. But alas I didnt!!!! And then....as the took me out to get some air a pushed the to gaurds and ran!!!!! Ran like the wind!!!!!!!" Belladonna cried out laughing. "YOU FEIND!!!!!!!!!" Charlie shouted. "What are you going to do??" Carface snapped. "Not with her army you cant!!!!!!!!" Killer said. "Ah yes!!!! My army!!!!!" Belladonna cried. She walked up. 'Is it hot in here or is it just the heat from the center of the earth??' Charlie thought to himself. He wiped sweat off his forehead and watched. Belladonna pulled over the curtain and every bad guy imanginable. There was at least one milloin. "Now..." Belladonna said. "ATTACK!!!!!!!!!!" All the bad guys pounced out on the three. But they were no match for thier powers. Sasha screamed at the top of her lungs, sending half of them flying into the air. They soared at hit the ground so hard the ground rumbled. Itchy flew up and was throwing rocks down and putting them under coma. Charlie was doing well also. He fought to his hearts content and all the baddies were being picked up and thrown be Charlie. "FIGHT IDIOTS!!!!!!!!" Belladonna yelled. "Or I'll send all of you back to the other eternity!!!!!" This seemed to work. The baddies got stroger and fought more and more. But then something happened. Something terrible. Something past terrible!!!! "NO!!!! THE TAG IS WEARING OFF!!!!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. "WHAT??!!" Itchy yelled. Charlie was yelping with pain. He couldnt keepn it up much longer. He had to do something. His face was covered with cuts and sweat. As was Itchys. And sashas. "SASHA!!!!!!!!" Charlie cried out. "SASHA WHERE ARE YOU??!!" Charlie cried out fighting his path way to get to his one true love. "CHARLIE!!!!!!!! HELP ME!!!!!!!! I CANT SCREAM ANYMORE!!!!!!!" Then a flashing light came down from the sky. The tag had offically wore off!!!! "NOOO!!!!!" Itchy cried falling from the sky. "ITCH!!!! HE CANT HANDLE ALL THOSE BOZOS ON HIS OWN!!!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. "SASHA!!!!! ITCHY!!!!!!!!!" Charlie yelled. "HAHAHA!!!!!!!" Belladonna yelled laughing. Then Charlie thought of something. 'Its crazy but it just might work' Charlie thought. Chapter 8. The death of Belladonna and Homecoming. 'Its crazy but it is worth a try' Charlie said. As Baddies closed up on him Charlie said: "All my fiends will disappear And I will be safe as the other eternity Will save me" A huge green vortex came up and sucked up all the baddies. "NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Belladonna cried. All was gone. All her plans her foiled. Well...not all. "I still have the hypnosis tone!!!" Belladonna cried. But then a huge green tiger came down and growled. "WHAT THE....." Belladonna shouted. It roared so loud that Charlie couldnt even her him breathe. It took lunging steps towards Belladonna who cowarded with fear. "H..h..help!!!!!!!!!!!" She cried. But then with one swipe of jaws she was dead. It turned to the three. It bowed. And it vanished. "Oh nice work Charles!!!" Annabelle said. She had the worn tag in her paws. "I hope you've learned something today." "I have Annabelle. This day tought me that..everything doest turn out how you plan and you cant always get what you want" Charlie said. "Well done Charles" Annabelle said smiling. "This is a story to be told years to come." Chapter 9. Ending. Annablle closed the book. "Now that was a great stroy right kids???" "Yes Annablle" the kids said. "What happened to Belladonna?? One asked. "Ah. Good questoin" Annabelle said. "This story happened three years ago you see and well...she got sent to the other eternity again" Annabelle said. "So she is going insane again??" "Well...." Annabelle said smiling up at the heavenly hills. There was a figure up there. A purple one. "Not excactly" Annabelle said smiling at the figure. It smiled back. "Then waht?? Did she die there??" the pup asked again. "Lets just say she saw a light" Annabelle said beaming at the little puppys. "Please tell us" another pup said. "Ok. Ok" Annabelle giggled. "Well you might want to look up at the hills." The pups looked up at the hills and saw a farmilar figuere. They laughed and waved up to her. Belladonna laughed also and waved back. "Now kids run along" Annabelle said. One turned around while the others left. "What is our next story about??" Annabelles eyes twinkled. "Well there will certaintly be another villan. But we will have to wait and see." (Closing song High school muscail~Music in me) THE END!!!!!What do think??? leave a comment
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Post by newshadow777 on Apr 15, 2008 16:12:45 GMT -5
Chapter 5. Charlie strikes a plan. "Guys!!!! I thought of the most schemeing plan there has ever been!!!!" Charlie cried. "What??!!" Sasha cried out. "What is it???" "Well.....I drew out a couple of plans that were pretty cool but this one stands out!!!! I found a way to use this tag to make us....SUPER HEROES!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. "Genius!!!!!" Sasha called out. "Awsome plan Charlie!!!!" "Oh tag??? I little bit of magic if you may" Charlie said. A huge beam of light came up and then just fell back into the tag. "Well???" Charlie said looking at both his amigoes. "Well...I dont feel any...different" Itchy said. "Me either" Sasha said. "What??" Charlie said feeling depressed. "I'm sorry Charlie" Itchy said. He jumped up on his seat and surprisingly didnt come down. "Hey!!!" Itchy cried. "I cant I come down??" "Itchy...your...your flying!!!!" Charlie cried. "My gosh.....I AM FLYING!!!!" Itchy yelled with glee. "I can fly!!!! I can fly!!!!!" Itchy yelled hysterically. I'm flying I'm flying!!!!" Itchy shouted doing loopty loops to test his miracle. "What can I do???" Sahsa asked. "Maybe you cann freeze time??? Here!!!! Stop this!!!" Charlie said pouring rootbeer over Sasha. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!" Sasha cried. But this was no ordinary scream. It sent out super sonic booms!!! "Hey!!!! I have a sonic screams!!!!!" Sasha cried. "I think we knew that when we flew through the air" Charlie said. "Oh Charlie I am...not sorry!!!! Look at my poor hair!!!!" Sasha yelled. "Hey what can I do???" Charlie asked. He tried to levatate things. He tried to go invisable. He tried to read minds. Nothing happened. "GRR!!!" Charlie cried. He was so angery he felt something inside him. Something odd. He marched over to the mini sofa van and...lifted it straight up!!!!! "CHARLIE!!!!! You have super strenth!!!!!" Itchy cried out. "YES!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. (As they test thier powers the song Jonas brothers song~Kids of the future comes on) "Lets go and find out those plans!!!" Charlie said. Chapter 6. Super Villans and super heroes. Itchy peeped up through Carfaces window. Belladonna was there. As she went trough the plan again once more they set off. Itchy listened to the whole thing. "And they pull it off at mid night" Itchy said telling his pals the plan. "But...but...Its midnight in....FIVE MINUTES!!!!!" Sasha yelled looking at the clock. "Well why are we here staring at the clock!!!!! Lets move!!!!!!!" Charlie yelled. Him and his best mates ran (Well all except Itchy who flew) towards Carfaces house until they reached a huge hole. "Whoa" the three said in unisoin. "Well...I think they went down there" Charlie said. "Are you kidding me??!!" Sasha said looking down the humognus hole. "You cant make me go down there!!!!" "Come on Sasha. Just picture it as a huge slidy thingy" Charlie said, looking a bit tooken a back that he was going down there himself. "I'm not scared!!!!" Itchy said proudly. "Well duh!!! You can fly!!!" Sasha said. "Look come on" Charlie said. He took a deep breath and jumped down the hole. "AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!" Charlie cried going down the hole. His yelp got softer and softer as he went deeper. Itchy went next. "WWWWEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!" Itchy cried going down. His yelp for fun was also fading. "Aw. Well it couldnt get worse" Sasha groaned. She jumped down also. "YYYYYAAAAAHHHH!!!!!" she screamed. The hole seemed to go on for ever. Then the heat got closer. It was warm. Then hot. Then scroching. Then boiling!!!! "We're getting closer to the core of the earth!!!!" Charlie yelled up towards the hole hoping the other would hear him. The landed. "OOF!!!!!" Charlie yelped, hitting the ground. YEA!!!" Itchy said with glee coming out the end of the hole. "OW!!!!!" Sasha cried out, smacking on the ground. "Well well well Killer. Look who it is" Carface said smirking downn at them. "Carface" Charlie moaned. "YES!!!! It is me!!!!" Carface said. "And now...Itchy are you flying???" "Yes...yes I am" Itchy said proudly. "Well....anyway.... now to meet the host of our little party" Carface said taken a back by Itchys flight. Then a shadow came up. A mental laugh. It was only one person. "BELLADONNA!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. Chapter 7. The final battle. "HAHAHA!!!!!" Belladonna laughed. "IT IS I!!!!!!!!!!" "I thought we took care of you??? How did you escape???" Itchy said. "AH!!! I thought they had me!! I thought I would die a couple of hours later. I thought this every day. But alas I didnt!!!! And then....as the took me out to get some air a pushed the to gaurds and ran!!!!! Ran like the wind!!!!!!!" Belladonna cried out laughing. "YOU FEIND!!!!!!!!!" Charlie shouted. "What are you going to do??" Carface snapped. "Not with her army you cant!!!!!!!!" Killer said. "Ah yes!!!! My army!!!!!" Belladonna cried. She walked up. 'Is it hot in here or is it just the heat from the center of the earth??' Charlie thought to himself. He wiped sweat off his forehead and watched. Belladonna pulled over the curtain and every bad guy imanginable. There was at least one milloin. "Now..." Belladonna said. "ATTACK!!!!!!!!!!" All the bad guys pounced out on the three. But they were no match for thier powers. Sasha screamed at the top of her lungs, sending half of them flying into the air. They soared at hit the ground so hard the ground rumbled. Itchy flew up and was throwing rocks down and putting them under coma. Charlie was doing well also. He fought to his hearts content and all the baddies were being picked up and thrown be Charlie. "FIGHT IDIOTS!!!!!!!!" Belladonna yelled. "Or I'll send all of you back to the other eternity!!!!!" This seemed to work. The baddies got stroger and fought more and more. But then something happened. Something terrible. Something past terrible!!!! "NO!!!! THE TAG IS WEARING OFF!!!!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. "WHAT??!!" Itchy yelled. Charlie was yelping with pain. He couldnt keepn it up much longer. He had to do something. His face was covered with cuts and sweat. As was Itchys. And sashas. "SASHA!!!!!!!!" Charlie cried out. "SASHA WHERE ARE YOU??!!" Charlie cried out fighting his path way to get to his one true love. "CHARLIE!!!!!!!! HELP ME!!!!!!!! I CANT SCREAM ANYMORE!!!!!!!" Then a flashing light came down from the sky. The tag had offically wore off!!!! "NOOO!!!!!" Itchy cried falling from the sky. "ITCH!!!! HE CANT HANDLE ALL THOSE BOZOS ON HIS OWN!!!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. "SASHA!!!!! ITCHY!!!!!!!!!" Charlie yelled. "HAHAHA!!!!!!!" Belladonna yelled laughing. Then Charlie thought of something. 'Its crazy but it just might work' Charlie thought. Chapter 8. The death of Belladonna and Homecoming. 'Its crazy but it is worth a try' Charlie said. As Baddies closed up on him Charlie said: "All my fiends will disappear And I will be safe as the other eternity Will save me" A huge green vortex came up and sucked up all the baddies. "NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Belladonna cried. All was gone. All her plans her foiled. Well...not all. "I still have the hypnosis tone!!!" Belladonna cried. But then a huge green tiger came down and growled. "WHAT THE....." Belladonna shouted. It roared so loud that Charlie couldnt even her him breathe. It took lunging steps towards Belladonna who cowarded with fear. "H..h..help!!!!!!!!!!!" She cried. But then with one swipe of jaws she was dead. It turned to the three. It bowed. And it vanished. "Oh nice work Charles!!!" Annabelle said. She had the worn tag in her paws. "I hope you've learned something today." "I have Annabelle. This day tought me that..everything doest turn out how you plan and you cant always get what you want" Charlie said. "Well done Charles" Annabelle said smiling. "This is a story to be told years to come." Chapter 9. Ending. Annablle closed the book. "Now that was a great stroy right kids???" "Yes Annablle" the kids said. "What happened to Belladonna?? One asked. "Ah. Good questoin" Annabelle said. "This story happened three years ago you see and well...she got sent to the other eternity again" Annabelle said. "So she is going insane again??" "Well...." Annabelle said smiling up at the heavenly hills. There was a figure up there. A purple one. "Not excactly" Annabelle said smiling at the figure. It smiled back. "Then waht?? Did she die there??" the pup asked again. "Lets just say she saw a light" Annabelle said beaming at the little puppys. "Please tell us" another pup said. "Ok. Ok" Annabelle giggled. "Well you might want to look up at the hills." The pups looked up at the hills and saw a farmilar figuere. They laughed and waved up to her. Belladonna laughed also and waved back. "Now kids run along" Annabelle said. One turned around while the others left. "What is our next story about??" Annabelles eyes twinkled. "Well there will certaintly be another villan. But we will have to wait and see." (Closing song High school muscail~Music in me) THE END!!!!!What do think??? leave a comment (Shakes her hand) Make a book and sell it i love it.
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 16, 2008 5:39:31 GMT -5
Chapter 5. Charlie strikes a plan. "Guys!!!! I thought of the most schemeing plan there has ever been!!!!" Charlie cried. "What??!!" Sasha cried out. "What is it???" "Well.....I drew out a couple of plans that were pretty cool but this one stands out!!!! I found a way to use this tag to make us....SUPER HEROES!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. "Genius!!!!!" Sasha called out. "Awsome plan Charlie!!!!" "Oh tag??? I little bit of magic if you may" Charlie said. A huge beam of light came up and then just fell back into the tag. "Well???" Charlie said looking at both his amigoes. "Well...I dont feel any...different" Itchy said. "Me either" Sasha said. "What??" Charlie said feeling depressed. "I'm sorry Charlie" Itchy said. He jumped up on his seat and surprisingly didnt come down. "Hey!!!" Itchy cried. "I cant I come down??" "Itchy...your...your flying!!!!" Charlie cried. "My gosh.....I AM FLYING!!!!" Itchy yelled with glee. "I can fly!!!! I can fly!!!!!" Itchy yelled hysterically. I'm flying I'm flying!!!!" Itchy shouted doing loopty loops to test his miracle. "What can I do???" Sahsa asked. "Maybe you cann freeze time??? Here!!!! Stop this!!!" Charlie said pouring rootbeer over Sasha. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!" Sasha cried. But this was no ordinary scream. It sent out super sonic booms!!! "Hey!!!! I have a sonic screams!!!!!" Sasha cried. "I think we knew that when we flew through the air" Charlie said. "Oh Charlie I am...not sorry!!!! Look at my poor hair!!!!" Sasha yelled. "Hey what can I do???" Charlie asked. He tried to levatate things. He tried to go invisable. He tried to read minds. Nothing happened. "GRR!!!" Charlie cried. He was so angery he felt something inside him. Something odd. He marched over to the mini sofa van and...lifted it straight up!!!!! "CHARLIE!!!!! You have super strenth!!!!!" Itchy cried out. "YES!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. (As they test thier powers the song Jonas brothers song~Kids of the future comes on) "Lets go and find out those plans!!!" Charlie said. Chapter 6. Super Villans and super heroes. Itchy peeped up through Carfaces window. Belladonna was there. As she went trough the plan again once more they set off. Itchy listened to the whole thing. "And they pull it off at mid night" Itchy said telling his pals the plan. "But...but...Its midnight in....FIVE MINUTES!!!!!" Sasha yelled looking at the clock. "Well why are we here staring at the clock!!!!! Lets move!!!!!!!" Charlie yelled. Him and his best mates ran (Well all except Itchy who flew) towards Carfaces house until they reached a huge hole. "Whoa" the three said in unisoin. "Well...I think they went down there" Charlie said. "Are you kidding me??!!" Sasha said looking down the humognus hole. "You cant make me go down there!!!!" "Come on Sasha. Just picture it as a huge slidy thingy" Charlie said, looking a bit tooken a back that he was going down there himself. "I'm not scared!!!!" Itchy said proudly. "Well duh!!! You can fly!!!" Sasha said. "Look come on" Charlie said. He took a deep breath and jumped down the hole. "AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!" Charlie cried going down the hole. His yelp got softer and softer as he went deeper. Itchy went next. "WWWWEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!" Itchy cried going down. His yelp for fun was also fading. "Aw. Well it couldnt get worse" Sasha groaned. She jumped down also. "YYYYYAAAAAHHHH!!!!!" she screamed. The hole seemed to go on for ever. Then the heat got closer. It was warm. Then hot. Then scroching. Then boiling!!!! "We're getting closer to the core of the earth!!!!" Charlie yelled up towards the hole hoping the other would hear him. The landed. "OOF!!!!!" Charlie yelped, hitting the ground. YEA!!!" Itchy said with glee coming out the end of the hole. "OW!!!!!" Sasha cried out, smacking on the ground. "Well well well Killer. Look who it is" Carface said smirking downn at them. "Carface" Charlie moaned. "YES!!!! It is me!!!!" Carface said. "And now...Itchy are you flying???" "Yes...yes I am" Itchy said proudly. "Well....anyway.... now to meet the host of our little party" Carface said taken a back by Itchys flight. Then a shadow came up. A mental laugh. It was only one person. "BELLADONNA!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. Chapter 7. The final battle. "HAHAHA!!!!!" Belladonna laughed. "IT IS I!!!!!!!!!!" "I thought we took care of you??? How did you escape???" Itchy said. "AH!!! I thought they had me!! I thought I would die a couple of hours later. I thought this every day. But alas I didnt!!!! And then....as the took me out to get some air a pushed the to gaurds and ran!!!!! Ran like the wind!!!!!!!" Belladonna cried out laughing. "YOU FEIND!!!!!!!!!" Charlie shouted. "What are you going to do??" Carface snapped. "Not with her army you cant!!!!!!!!" Killer said. "Ah yes!!!! My army!!!!!" Belladonna cried. She walked up. 'Is it hot in here or is it just the heat from the center of the earth??' Charlie thought to himself. He wiped sweat off his forehead and watched. Belladonna pulled over the curtain and every bad guy imanginable. There was at least one milloin. "Now..." Belladonna said. "ATTACK!!!!!!!!!!" All the bad guys pounced out on the three. But they were no match for thier powers. Sasha screamed at the top of her lungs, sending half of them flying into the air. They soared at hit the ground so hard the ground rumbled. Itchy flew up and was throwing rocks down and putting them under coma. Charlie was doing well also. He fought to his hearts content and all the baddies were being picked up and thrown be Charlie. "FIGHT IDIOTS!!!!!!!!" Belladonna yelled. "Or I'll send all of you back to the other eternity!!!!!" This seemed to work. The baddies got stroger and fought more and more. But then something happened. Something terrible. Something past terrible!!!! "NO!!!! THE TAG IS WEARING OFF!!!!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. "WHAT??!!" Itchy yelled. Charlie was yelping with pain. He couldnt keepn it up much longer. He had to do something. His face was covered with cuts and sweat. As was Itchys. And sashas. "SASHA!!!!!!!!" Charlie cried out. "SASHA WHERE ARE YOU??!!" Charlie cried out fighting his path way to get to his one true love. "CHARLIE!!!!!!!! HELP ME!!!!!!!! I CANT SCREAM ANYMORE!!!!!!!" Then a flashing light came down from the sky. The tag had offically wore off!!!! "NOOO!!!!!" Itchy cried falling from the sky. "ITCH!!!! HE CANT HANDLE ALL THOSE BOZOS ON HIS OWN!!!!!!!!!" Charlie cried. "SASHA!!!!! ITCHY!!!!!!!!!" Charlie yelled. "HAHAHA!!!!!!!" Belladonna yelled laughing. Then Charlie thought of something. 'Its crazy but it just might work' Charlie thought. Chapter 8. The death of Belladonna and Homecoming. 'Its crazy but it is worth a try' Charlie said. As Baddies closed up on him Charlie said: "All my fiends will disappear And I will be safe as the other eternity Will save me" A huge green vortex came up and sucked up all the baddies. "NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Belladonna cried. All was gone. All her plans her foiled. Well...not all. "I still have the hypnosis tone!!!" Belladonna cried. But then a huge green tiger came down and growled. "WHAT THE....." Belladonna shouted. It roared so loud that Charlie couldnt even her him breathe. It took lunging steps towards Belladonna who cowarded with fear. "H..h..help!!!!!!!!!!!" She cried. But then with one swipe of jaws she was dead. It turned to the three. It bowed. And it vanished. "Oh nice work Charles!!!" Annabelle said. She had the worn tag in her paws. "I hope you've learned something today." "I have Annabelle. This day tought me that..everything doest turn out how you plan and you cant always get what you want" Charlie said. "Well done Charles" Annabelle said smiling. "This is a story to be told years to come." Chapter 9. Ending. Annablle closed the book. "Now that was a great stroy right kids???" "Yes Annablle" the kids said. "What happened to Belladonna?? One asked. "Ah. Good questoin" Annabelle said. "This story happened three years ago you see and well...she got sent to the other eternity again" Annabelle said. "So she is going insane again??" "Well...." Annabelle said smiling up at the heavenly hills. There was a figure up there. A purple one. "Not excactly" Annabelle said smiling at the figure. It smiled back. "Then waht?? Did she die there??" the pup asked again. "Lets just say she saw a light" Annabelle said beaming at the little puppys. "Please tell us" another pup said. "Ok. Ok" Annabelle giggled. "Well you might want to look up at the hills." The pups looked up at the hills and saw a farmilar figuere. They laughed and waved up to her. Belladonna laughed also and waved back. "Now kids run along" Annabelle said. One turned around while the others left. "What is our next story about??" Annabelles eyes twinkled. "Well there will certaintly be another villan. But we will have to wait and see." (Closing song High school muscail~Music in me) THE END!!!!!What do think??? leave a comment (Shakes her hand) Make a book and sell it i love it. Thank you.
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Post by Charlie Wolf on Apr 16, 2008 16:56:24 GMT -5
Ha ha!!! Pretty good, especially for its relatively short length that it is comprised of. The ONLY objection I had at all was that you put the words Britney Spears in the fic. *Has bad flashback of ALL of the DUI allegations, Dr. Phil interviews, and all the other various, et cetera news/media reports on her.....!* Anyway, aside from that fairly minor problem, when you say "the OTHER eternity", depending on the context of its usage within the sentence, I rightfully assume that you mean [glow=WHITE,7,777]HAEVEN[/glow] and [glow=BLACK,6,666]HELL[/glow] now, right -Charlie. ;D
P.S. LOL, LOTS o' [glow=white,5,000]COLORS[/glow]!!!!!
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Post by newshadow777 on Apr 16, 2008 17:24:25 GMT -5
Ha ha!!! Pretty good, especially for its relatively short length that it is comprised of. The ONLY objection I had at all was that you put the words Britney Spears in the fic. *Has bad flashback of ALL of the DUI allegations, Dr. Phil interviews, and all the other various, et cetera news/media reports on her.....!* Anyway, aside from that fairly minor problem, when you say "the OTHER eternity", depending on the context of its usage within the sentence, I rightfully assume that you mean [glow=WHITE,7,777]HAEVEN[/glow] and [glow=BLACK,6,666]HELL[/glow] now, right -Charlie. ;D
P.S. LOL, LOTS o' [glow=white,5,000]COLORS[/glow]!!!!! @_@ To many colors
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Post by jongfourtv on Apr 16, 2008 20:20:21 GMT -5
Very long fanfiction to read !
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 17, 2008 10:55:07 GMT -5
Ha ha!!! Pretty good, especially for its relatively short length that it is comprised of. The ONLY objection I had at all was that you put the words Britney Spears in the fic. *Has bad flashback of ALL of the DUI allegations, Dr. Phil interviews, and all the other various, et cetera news/media reports on her.....!* Anyway, aside from that fairly minor problem, when you say "the OTHER eternity", depending on the context of its usage within the sentence, I rightfully assume that you mean [glow=WHITE,7,777]HAEVEN[/glow] and [glow=BLACK,6,666]HELL[/glow] now, right -Charlie. ;D
P.S. LOL, LOTS o' [glow=white,5,000]COLORS[/glow]!!!!! 8-)I'm taking that as a complimant. Thank you Charlie wolf.
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 17, 2008 10:55:42 GMT -5
Very long fanfiction to read ! But did you enjoy it???
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Post by newshadow777 on Apr 17, 2008 19:20:52 GMT -5
Very long fanfiction to read ! But did you enjoy it??? I did
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 18, 2008 10:45:23 GMT -5
Hey guys. Who enjoyed it???
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 20, 2008 14:48:37 GMT -5
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whitefangs
Tail Wagger
Where theres Jack, theres trouble
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Post by whitefangs on Apr 30, 2008 13:31:57 GMT -5
Nice song
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