Post by Charles B. on Sept 13, 2004 20:42:22 GMT -5
A year, it had been a year. A year the cancer had been eating at his brain and body but through it all he knew that it would be over soon. A year, a year he had the cancer slowly eating away at his sainty. He didn't notice at first, he just couldn't focus or just got more and more tired. HE knew something was wrong when the nightmares started. At first every couple of nights, but then every night it was the nightmares. Then every day it was the nightmares until every moment of every day was filled with them. What made them even worse was these nightmare were real.These nightmares were memoriess, the memories he had long since tried to forget. The gardden he had been left in as a pup, his beautiful prison which he hated, the day his motehr denied his very existence, right in front of him, and the alley, the alley where she had sai" I will be right back". No these were real adn thy slowly ate away at his sanity. First he would his hit his head, hoping ot jumble them out, then it came to running , running until he could literally run no more but finally when the cancer had made it impossible to move, he sat and replayed them in his mind over and over again. He wasn't in pain, well physical pain, now but still he was nervous about it all coming to an end. As the cancer slowly ate away on what little of him was left, the shell that had once been a strong, fast dog, he slowly slipped into the black never to wake again.As the black took over all he could do was listen to her words that kept on replaying in his head "I'll be back , honey, dont worry" and he slipped away.
Chap two
Black, it was the last thing I remembered, then light, had it all just been a nightmare? Slowly I got up and looked around. I knew this place but from where? Hanz was a little whoozy and disoreintated, as he slwly got his ability to focus back he jumped abck in horror, it was his prison, the garden. The place he had been left as a puppy to play, be, and eat by himself for years. Never had he imagined he would se it again.
"He he, do you liek it, I had it done specially for you." He whirled around to see a whippet floating in midair behind him. Now he could see his vision was as clear as ever. He saw many things outside of his loathed prison, clouds, a gate, more dogs, everything one could dream of he saw,
"Wait" he yelled with surprise," I m not blind in my right eye," HE looked around with amazement.
"Of course not silly, your in heaven now, welcome to being dead!!O i just love saying that to new comers" Hanz looked at where he was, no he didn't like this garden in fact he loathed it more than aything else.He wouldn't crash this..... wait had she said heaven, and dead?!!?
" Are you saying I m dead!!" Hanz yelled with suprise,so it hadn't been a dream, he thought to himslef, and now they bring me up to waht is supposed to be heaven adn set me in my private prison, what kind of sick people run thsi place.
""Yes , By the way I m Annabella and Welcome, " She motioned her paw towards a gate that let us out of the garde. She flew over towards a podium, yes flew and sat on her huanches behind it.
"Hanz, Hanz Schuldt, right? What a funny name, not that I haven't heard funnier of wierder " She said looking all giddy. " Well et's get down to buisness. I need you to put your paw print here ,for our records"
Hanz looked at the book with amazement, it had everything that had ever ahppened to him summed up in one page, and it was deatiled, talk aobut fineprint.
"Hmmm, can I see this book?" he asked,"
" WEll sure, I don't see why not" Said Annabelle who then handed him the book. Hanz took the book firmly in both paws. He read some of the page, ha, they know everything, He said, Even stuf I dont want them to know. He had to think of a ditraction so he could rip his page out. He dipped his paw in the powder stuff she had held out. Before he put down his paw thoug he asked
" So what kind of activities you got to do around here?" Hanz said , not really caring just hoping to distract this annoying Whippet, Annabelle.
" O well, we have many things to do, here are a few, but realize there are more than just what I m mentioning," She went on with a list of things. While she was focusing on listing of activities Hanz slowly rippede out the page and crumpled it up adn threw it slyly to the side,he then quickly stamped his paw on the next page adn handed it too Annabelle.
"Hmmm, O thanks," She said and grabbed the book," What else is there, O yes, how could I forget, guardian Angel training. I think you can take that.Yes, you can, I feel that you would be able to handle it, many angels want to take it, mostly because you get to go to earth to fufill missions" She added the last part with a hint of heavenly pride. Upon hearing the words "go back to earth", Hanz got very intrested.
"You know what, I think I wouldlike to do that, so what do I gotta do" He said, he would do anything to get out of this place, he ad only been in heaven 2 hours and already he didn't like it.
"Well of course this is a vigorous course you have to go through, headed by one of our sternest Angels, Silvanus Snarl, and , pardon the pun, he's got a droopy character," Seeing the confused look on Hanz's face Annabelle added" You will get it when you see him"
"Ok lead the way"He couldn't wait to get out of here so Hanz motioned for her to lead him as they entered the main area of heaven.
Chap two
Black, it was the last thing I remembered, then light, had it all just been a nightmare? Slowly I got up and looked around. I knew this place but from where? Hanz was a little whoozy and disoreintated, as he slwly got his ability to focus back he jumped abck in horror, it was his prison, the garden. The place he had been left as a puppy to play, be, and eat by himself for years. Never had he imagined he would se it again.
"He he, do you liek it, I had it done specially for you." He whirled around to see a whippet floating in midair behind him. Now he could see his vision was as clear as ever. He saw many things outside of his loathed prison, clouds, a gate, more dogs, everything one could dream of he saw,
"Wait" he yelled with surprise," I m not blind in my right eye," HE looked around with amazement.
"Of course not silly, your in heaven now, welcome to being dead!!O i just love saying that to new comers" Hanz looked at where he was, no he didn't like this garden in fact he loathed it more than aything else.He wouldn't crash this..... wait had she said heaven, and dead?!!?
" Are you saying I m dead!!" Hanz yelled with suprise,so it hadn't been a dream, he thought to himslef, and now they bring me up to waht is supposed to be heaven adn set me in my private prison, what kind of sick people run thsi place.
""Yes , By the way I m Annabella and Welcome, " She motioned her paw towards a gate that let us out of the garde. She flew over towards a podium, yes flew and sat on her huanches behind it.
"Hanz, Hanz Schuldt, right? What a funny name, not that I haven't heard funnier of wierder " She said looking all giddy. " Well et's get down to buisness. I need you to put your paw print here ,for our records"
Hanz looked at the book with amazement, it had everything that had ever ahppened to him summed up in one page, and it was deatiled, talk aobut fineprint.
"Hmmm, can I see this book?" he asked,"
" WEll sure, I don't see why not" Said Annabelle who then handed him the book. Hanz took the book firmly in both paws. He read some of the page, ha, they know everything, He said, Even stuf I dont want them to know. He had to think of a ditraction so he could rip his page out. He dipped his paw in the powder stuff she had held out. Before he put down his paw thoug he asked
" So what kind of activities you got to do around here?" Hanz said , not really caring just hoping to distract this annoying Whippet, Annabelle.
" O well, we have many things to do, here are a few, but realize there are more than just what I m mentioning," She went on with a list of things. While she was focusing on listing of activities Hanz slowly rippede out the page and crumpled it up adn threw it slyly to the side,he then quickly stamped his paw on the next page adn handed it too Annabelle.
"Hmmm, O thanks," She said and grabbed the book," What else is there, O yes, how could I forget, guardian Angel training. I think you can take that.Yes, you can, I feel that you would be able to handle it, many angels want to take it, mostly because you get to go to earth to fufill missions" She added the last part with a hint of heavenly pride. Upon hearing the words "go back to earth", Hanz got very intrested.
"You know what, I think I wouldlike to do that, so what do I gotta do" He said, he would do anything to get out of this place, he ad only been in heaven 2 hours and already he didn't like it.
"Well of course this is a vigorous course you have to go through, headed by one of our sternest Angels, Silvanus Snarl, and , pardon the pun, he's got a droopy character," Seeing the confused look on Hanz's face Annabelle added" You will get it when you see him"
"Ok lead the way"He couldn't wait to get out of here so Hanz motioned for her to lead him as they entered the main area of heaven.