It's Only Beginning

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1.) Don't write the script for me, that's my job.

2.)Just tell me at the end of each chapter what you'd think would be good, suggestion, and comments.

3.)And if you try to write the script for me, I'll just continue on my way, just ignoring you.

4.) I'm not trying to be mean, but I just have a pet peeve about these sort of things.

5.) And if I make any mistakes please tell me so I can fix it.

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Chapter 1-
A light brown puppy stood on top of the Fleabite Cafe' counter with ocean blue eyes with a patch of white next on top of her eye looked down on the other dogs at a starting line with a big grin. She jumped down from the counter onto the stool but slipped. She would of falled if not a large mouth grabbed her by the scruff of the neck and gently lowered her on the ground. It's Charlie and he smiles at the pup. The pup smiles back and giggles. She tries to get away but Charlie puts a paw in front of her blocking her exit.
"Whoa," he smiled "Where are you going in such a hurry?" The pup giggled and jumped trying to get over the paw, but he caught her and layed her in front of him. "Uncle Charlie, let go." The pup giggled. "Now where are you going little Mozart?" Charlie asked picking up the pup by the scruff of her neck and setting her on her feet. "I'm going to enter the Doggone' Race like all the other dogs." Mozart smiled. "Now Mozart, sweetie, you're still-" He started to say,
"A puppy, I know, I know." the pup said. "That's right and since the dogs are bigger, you might-" He started to say again.
"Get stepped on, get pushed around, or even get lost." Mozart recited. "Hahaha, very funny," Charlie said giving the pup a gentle nuge. "Go join your brothers and sisters playing with Uncle Itchy."
They both look over to see Itchy playing with four other pups and lauging the whole time. Mozart smiles and runs along to join her brothers and sister in playing with Uncle Itchy.
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REMEMBER- NO ONE WRITE'S THIS SCRIPT EXCEPT ME!
Not the end of the chapter yet.

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Mozart collided with her brothers and sisters and started to playfully bite Itchy's ear. The others pup started to giggle. One pup chased his sister around in a circle and the little pup collided with a stubby, leg. The pup looked up to Carface and with Killer behind him. The pup started to back up and stood behind Itchy.
"Don't stop jollying around on my account," He snarled "I'm just here to collect my dues." As he started to walk down to a booth he knocked over decorations for the Doggone' Race. He then knocked off a a small rack with medals on it. Calypso, another pup, took a step forward. "Hey that wasn't nice!" the pup remarked. "Oh, well too bad kid," He replied. "Go do something useful and get out of my way!"
Calypso looked straight into Carface's face and stared angrily back at him, "Shock me, say something intelligent!" she dared. Carface raised an eyebrow while smiling. "Are you trying to call me an idiot, kid?" he asked.
"Calypso, don't do it." Itchy warned.
But the little pup ignored Itchy's warning. " Calling you an idiot would be an insult to all the stupid people." she said angrily. Carfae laughs at this and pats Calypso's head. "You're good kid, but don't let it get to your head, kid." he laughed. Sasha walked over to Calypso and picked her up by the scruff of her neck taking her back to over where she and Charlie sat. "Cracker Jack." Calypso muttered as Sasha carried her to Charlie.
"Whose meddling pups are these anyway?" Carface asked. "They're the pups of Phoebe." Itchy spoke up. Carface laughed at this too. "That mutt," he spoke through laughter, "That mutt had pups?"
Killer started to laugh too, "Shut up Killer." Carface threatened.
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That's all that I have for now but any suggestions on what should happen next? And remember I write the scripts don't write any continuations. thank- you.

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"You've already wasted enough of my time," he said walking towards the exit, "I'll be back tomorrow to collect." Then he left, with Killer following closely behind him. Shakespeare looked at the exit angrily. Who did he think he was calling his mother a mutt? He shook his head at the exit and trotted back to Charlie. "Uncle Charlie," he said stepping forward, "Why did he call our mom a mutt?"
"Well little guy," He said laying down in front of the pups, picked up his head. "Carface calls your mother that because simply he doesn't let go of a grudge."
"A grudge?" Jezebel repeated with her innocent pink eyes, "What's a grudge?"
"A grudge is when someone isn't ready to say that someone else beat them or are better at something else than that person is." Sasha explained. "But why does Cracker Jack have a grudge against our mom?" Calypso asked raising an eyebrow. "Well, you see it happened along time ago." Itchy told the pups.
"TELL US THE STORY!" the pups cried out in fits of giggles and yelps.

"Okay, okay." Charlie spoke above the pups giggles and yelps. "Well, this happened before any of you were born and before your mom met your dad,"
"I can almost remember it as if it was yesterday....."

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Chapter 2-
A young woman is seen scurrying in her house. She picks up a piece of toast and takes a bite out of it, sets it down and runs into the bathroom where she brushes her hair hard to where the point some comes out in the brush.
She puts the brush down and ruffles her hair some, places on a golden locket around her neck, and then scurries into the living room where she grabs her keys and her pocketbook and scurry out the door.
As she jumps into the car, she pushes a piece of hair out of her face. Then she jabbed the keys into the ignition and turned it on. The woman put the car into drive, a German Shepherd popped out from her front hedges and in her way. She put the car onto an abrupt stop as she looked at the German Shepherd. "C'Mon, Move!" she urged daring the dog to take a step, it never did. She plopped her head onto the staring wheel and looked up to see the German Shepherd was gone. "Finally," she said as she started the car back up again and drove down the street. As she was driving, she spotted the same German Shepherd with two other dogs and a little boy.

As she continues to stare, she swore the German Shepherd looked right at her and grinned. A buzzing sound came from her purse, as she dug through it and pulled out her cell-phone. "Hello?" she answered and looked back at to where th German Shepherd but once again he, and along with the others disappeared.
"Phoebe, where are you? Lucinda is going crazy over here and she keeps demanding you!" her best friend, Lily screeched into the cell-phone. "I'm sorry, I was busy last night and I slept in." she apologized to Lily. "Tell that to Lucinda," her friend told her as she could hear her boss, yelling and screaming in the background demanding her. "Alright I be there in a minute, stall." she told Lily as she drove around and the corner and ended up on the Golden Gate Bridge, "Okay, but Phoebe hurry!" Lily said quickly and hung up. Phoebe put the phone on the dashboard where she looked around and started to see dark clouds surface around Alcatraz Island. "Great," she murmured to herself as she watched the clouds circle Alcatraz Island like a vulture, "A storm just what I need." Then suddenly, Alcatraz seemed to plummet down into the ocean. "Oh My God!" She said as she saw the island slowly descend into the water. Slowly the bridge swayed back and fourth as the wind blew hard. Phoebe's cell-phone fell off the dashboard and crashed onto the floor. She grabbed onto the staring wheel and held on tight as the blowing became more powerful. Then suddenly it stopped and she heard a horn blow, and looked out to Alcatraz island to see a great light come from the descended island into the sky. The light brightened up the whole sky, and she had to look away. As she looked closer she could make out the small bodies of dogs ascending into the sky. "What the heck is going on here?" she asked herself as another bright light seemed to come from Alcatraz and pass on her side of the bridge. She started her car as the others seemed to keep moving, she kept going. Then two more dogs passed slowly pass her, and she could make out that it was the same German Shepherd from before with his Dachshund friend along. She seemed to stare at the German Shepherd for some time and it seemed to stare at her back before it zoomed into the sky.
She then lurched forward as her car jumped off the bridge. She screamed as the car hit the sea and sank.

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Purple and Green flashes of lights flashed before her eyes as she felt herself land hard on solid ground. As she got up, she could smell the sweet scent of apples and peaches. She looked around to see large fluffy clouds with pink or blue linings. She dusted off her knees. “What happened?” She asked herself. Then a great purple orb buzzed in front of her, she tried to swat it away but it kept coming back. “Go away,” she cried and finally collapsed on the ground sitting up. “What do you want from me?” The purple orb transformed into a pink whippet staring at her with its light blue eyes. “I want you to zip your mouth.” The whippet spoke to her. “WHOA,” Phoebe said backing up from the Whippet, “You can talk.”
“Yes,” the angelic pooch said walking forward to her, “And you can hear me, call me Annabell.” “Where am I?” Phoebe finally asked backing up a little more. “You’re in Heaven,” the pooch replied. Phoebe knocked into a large dog with a green shirt on and a glowing yellow halo above its head.
“Oh excuse me.” The dog apologized; she backed up more and bumped into a purple poodle with a blue shirt on and the same glowing yellow halo, “Pardon me.” The poodle answered as Phoebe backed into a pillar and slid down the pillar. “I’m-I’m dead?” she asked putting her head in her hands. “Do you want the truth or the lie to make you feel better?” the pooch asked. Phoebe just stared at her for a while got up and faced the pillar. Suddenly she started to bang her head on the pillar, “Wake up, wake up, wake up.” She repeated as each time she banged her head.
“I’m afraid you’re not dreaming,” Annabell assured. “Then what am I doing here,” Phoebe asked turning to the whippet, “I’m a human, not a dog!”
“Yes, I know but you did see one of my angels come back to Heaven.” Annabell said sitting down. “So what,” Phoebe said “You’re going to keep me here because I saw an angel?”
“No I’m sending you back to Earth,” she said looking down at the ground. “Really I get to go home?” Phoebe asked joyfully. She was going to go home! No longer dead she could get back on track. “Yes, joyfully but not as a human.” Annabell answered. Phoebe’s smile disappeared as she dropped her arms. “Then what am I going to Earth as?” she questioned Annabell. Annabell only looked down at the ground then gave a cheap smile at Phoebe. A light blue orb danced around Phoebe as she disappeared in a cloud of light blue smoke. As the blue smoke disappeared, a light brown, ginger like dog stood where Phoebe once stood. “What just happened?” the dog asked her eyes wondering everywhere. She looked behind her and spotted a tail. “Oh My God!” the dog cried as she fell backwards. “Phoebe, Phoebe please calm down!” Annabell said. “No, No, I will not calm down with a tail!” Phoebe shrieked. She started to look everywhere now panicky.
She was a dog! A dog! A dog with fur, tail, long ears and a snout! “You!” she said turning to Annabell angrily, “What did you do to me?” “Well, if I returned you to Earth as a human you would of told others about angels and then we’d be ruined!” Annabell told her backing up a bit.
“No I wouldn’t,” Phoebe promised pleading with her eyes, “I would’ve kept my mouth shut!”
“Why can’t you trust me anyways?” Phoebe asked slumping down on the ground.
“Because adults have difficulty keeping secrets like these.” The whippet explained
“Oh and kids can!” Phoebe snapped back.
“Well yes, because even if they try to tell, their parents don’t believe them or think it’s part of their imagination.” Clarified Annabell
“You’ll be meeting my two top angels, Charles B. Barkin and Itchy Itchiford and they’ll be helping you with your work.” Annabell told her as she walked down a path. “What-What work?” She asked as she followed the pink pooch. “Since you’ll be on Earth doing nothing, I’ll have you become an angel-in-training.” Annabell said walking up some steps to a large piece of ground above the rest. “Whoa,” Phoebe said uneasily “I’ll be working with other dogs?”
“I said my top two,” Annabell said taking out a light blue bandanna and passed it to Phoebe, “Here, it’s like a Heavenly Collar.” “A Heavenly Collar?” Phoebe repeated as Annabell placed it on her neck. “Yes, it let’s you communicate to humans when you want and use a water source or anything else reflective to contact me.” Annabell explained. “I almost forgot,” Annabell said holding out a object to Phoebe. As she got closer, she could see it was her golden locket. “My locket!” Phoebe exclaimed taking the locket and placing it also on her neck, and slid it under her bandanna.
“Now go and fulfill your new destiny.” She said and pushed Phoebe off a small cliff where Phoebe spun around like a giant whirlpool. “But I don’t have a destiny!” She started to scream as darkness overcame her eyesight. She awoke on the ground outside an alley. “Well that was a doozy.” She spoke to herself as she got herself up. She sat up against a shop wall, wondering where to go next. Do I go home and try to talk to Mom and Dad? She thought pondering missing her parents. As she sat there, her ears picked up voices from down the street and she looked to see who was coming. A large German Shepherd and a small Dachshund seemed to be arguing but she couldn’t make out what. As they got closer she could make out some only parts. “Annabell told us that the new angel would arrive here soon.” The wiener dog told the German Shepherd. “Did she say anything about the new hot stuff in town?” the large dog asked. “Only that the new angel would be wearing a light blue bandanna.” The Dachshund replied running with its stubby legs to keep up with its pal. As the German Shepherd came to pass her, he did a double look at her light blue bandanna. “Excuse me,” the German Shepherd spoke to her with great politeness, “Where did you get that blue bandanna?”
“I got it from Annabell like you two did.” Phoebe replied. “You’re the new angel?” the German Shepherd asked shocked. And here he assumed the angel would be a guy, not some gal. “So what’s ya name doll?” The larger dog asked. “Phoebe and second don’t call me-doll” Phoebe informed the large German Shepherd. “Okay, Okay,” the German Shepherd said “Let me introduce myself, I’m Charlie B. Barkin and my little pal here is Itchy Itchiford.”
Phoebe looked closely at Charlie and realized that he was the same dog from that morning she died on! “You’re that same dog from this morning,” Phoebe cried out, “you jumped out if front of my car, then I saw you again on the other side of the street, and again when you were being whisked up into Heaven!”
“What!” Itchy exclaimed, “Charlie, she’s a human!” “What is this?” Charlie asked looking angrily at the sky. “Annabell told me that because I saw you go to Heaven, she was afraid that if I went back to Earth I’d tell the others about angels and here I am.” Phoebe said feeling the anger and sadness rising inside of her. “I guess Annabell knows what she’s doing,” Charlie said looking at her, “So c’mon we’ll show you around.” He got up and walked down the alley next to her. Phoebe stood up, wobbled a bit and followed Charlie with Itchy following besides her. She discovered other dogs there like it was a hangout or a bar just for dogs completed with a stage, a bar, and a gambling table. She spotted a couch, jumped onto it and lies down. Meanwhile Charlie and Itchy walked over to a red Irish setter and stared at Phoebe on the couch. “Well where is he?” the setter asked. “She is over there.” Itchy corrected pointing to Phoebe. “Yeah, before she was a dog she was a human.” Charlie told her, his ears dropping. “Oh man,” the setter said looking at Phoebe, “Poor girl how is she taking it?” “Pretty good, I guess.” Charlie said looking away from Phoebe.
Phoebe took out her golden locket and opened it. She looked through small slides in the lockets to see pictures of her parents, her older sister Lola, and her three best friends Lilly, Rosalind, and Jake. Over the barking and talking of the other dogs she could hear faint music.
Then suddenly the music stopped as everything went silent. Phoebe looked up at the exit and saw a small, stubby bulldog with another dog with glasses at his side. “Alright pay up all of you!” the bulldog ordered looking around. He spotted Phoebe’s locket and moved toward it like a snake. “Hey lady.” The bulldog said moving his index and middle finger up and down with a thumb. Phoebe looked at him with a stern look on her face, “Are you suggesting that I break your fingers?” Phoebe hissed at him feeling the emotion of anger rise again. “Pay up.” the bulldog ordered reaching for the locket, but Phoebe grabbed his wrist. “You touch that locket, you come back with a bloody stub.” Phoebe threatened. “Listen lady I want my pay NOW!” the bulldog yelled his voice echoing in the club. Phoebe raised an eyebrow at him and turned away. “Look-” He started to say but Phoebe turned to him with full rage. “Unless you’re looking to be neutered, SCRAM!” Phoebe roared at the bulldog. It felt good to let out all the anger, the hurt, and the sadness of knowing that you may never see your family again.
The bulldog looked surprised but it quickly disappeared as he started to laugh. Phoebe raised her eyebrow at him. What was he laughing at? “You’re good doll face, very good,” He praised between laughter as he moved closer “Now hand over that locket.”
“Carface,” A husky spoke out walking towards the stubborn pooch, “You wouldn’t be hustling this lady, would you?” “I am,” Carface snapped at the tall husky “Now out of my way!” The husky stood in front of Phoebe protectively. “Back off Carface, I mean it.” The husky growled at him. “I’ll come back to get my dues Wednesday, be prepared.” He said looking around and with the other dog disappeared through the exit. While the husky was busy watching Carface leave, Phoebe jumped off the couch and walked over to the bar and sat down next to it.
The husky looked behind him happily expecting to see Phoebe but dropped his head in disappointment when he found her missing.
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So any ideas? I need ideas on what should happen next. Send me a message if you have an idea and if i like it, I will put it on and put it was your idea at the bottom. Thanx