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Post by wonderdog on Apr 19, 2008 13:10:46 GMT -5
Ok. Ok. I know I should finish off Nightfall first but I love to write storys about ADGTH and I just couldnt wait to put this up!!!!!! This is the plot. Characters: Charlie Sasha Jack(Wolf) Zaka Fetch Retriver Belladonna Carface Killer Opening song:I will use the opening song of Casino Royal, James bond. Plot: When Charlies old friend comes to San Fracisco he is pleased to see that someone has pleasure in schemes as he does. But when Belladonna finds out that a new dog is in town she will try everything to get him on her side!!!!! But when she tries at first Jack refuses. Then she goes to see his owner to work with him. He was also evil. Belladonna took control over his owner(Also named Jack. We will know him by Jack S beacause his second name is Spicer lol!!!!!!!) Anyway they work together to make a diabolcl scheme to get Jack onto thier team. Charlie found out and tried to stop it. He failed and then Jack (s) has to take the plan to Jack and told him lies about how good evil is. Jack listened closely and heard the word "Hapiness" which he always wanted. Jack (The wolf. We shall just call him Jack) had a bad life taken under Jack's (S) power. He fell for it and was under Belladonnas command!!!!! When he relized they were dumping Charlie down a waterfall to kill him Jack ran of to tell his friends back at the café. They got there to late. Jack relized that evil was no such thing as what Jack (S) said. He suddenly risks his own life to safe his best pal. But in the end of the day....Jack was happy living in the flea bite with his pals. (Well after destorying both evil demons and all that stuff!!!) ENJOY!!!!!!!!!!   |
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 19, 2008 13:59:12 GMT -5
Chapter 1. The meeting with the wolf.
"Now mum...when you get to kennel school today, you might hear something about a bealching contest. I just want you to know it never happened" Zaka said. Then he put on a face of traipmh. "And I was not the champoin!!!" Zaka said, feeling pleased with himself. "That is a good cover up Zaka" Sasha said sarcastically. Zaka knew he was defeated and silnked off. "Aw dude. Good thing we dont got parents" Fetch said after Zaka told them the story. "We are strays and proud of it." "I know. I wish I had the good life" Zaka said. "Being a stray is to hard-core for you" Retriver said. "You gotta get your own food, get your own home, dont get caught by the dog catcher, and dont let no one take you home with them." "Why not???" Zaka asked. "Owners just bore you" Fetch said. "What with their 'rules'." "Aw dude. David is soooo boring sometimes. Its magic after magic after magic..." Zaka said. "Whoa dude!!!!! We dont need to hear the horror!!!!!" Retriver said. "Well it is tourture!!!!!!!! 'Watch me do this. Watch me do that!!!'" Zaka said pulling on a soppy face mimecking David. "I'll pray for you" Retriver said, placing a paw on his shoulder. "Dude there is nothing we can do" Fetch sighed shaking his head. "Hes got it bad." "You gotta point there" Retriver said, also shaking his head. "It is sooo darn boring!!!!!" Zaka said rolling his eyes. "Zaka!!!!! Where are you??" Charlie yelled. "Here dad" Zaka said. "And now, as if this day couldnt get worse, I gotta go home and relive all the boredom!!!" Rtriver and Fetch both shook thier heads solemnly. "Lets go Zaka. David has got dinner ready" Charlie said. "ERRR!!!! But Dad!!!! It is always the same thing!!!!! Dog food, after dog food, after dog food" Zaka said, groaning. "Get over it!!!!!" Charlie snapped. Zaka moaned and walked on. "Charlie I will be home as soon as I get home from Zakas kennel schools parent night" Sasha said. "Alright. Just dont be late. Dinner is ready" Charlie said. The other pups were listening to Retriver and Fetch tell Zakas story. The pups gasped as Retriver put a little drama into it. "Cant you tell...David...that he is boring?!?!" Zaka groaned. "HEY!!! He may be boring but he did give us a home!!!!!!!!" Charlie shouted at him. He was about to tell the story that Zaka was tired of hearing. As Charlie told it, Zaka pretended to say it in a goofy way. They walked home together. But as Charlie and his son were walking the saw something sprint for its life. It fell in front of thier door step. "WHO THE HECK WAS THAT?!?!?!" Zaka laughed. "I dont know" Charlie said, looking puzzled. He walked up to it. "Jack?!?!?!" Charlie said. It was a wolf lieing there on the step. "Ughh" it moaned. It got up and rubbed his head. "What the...Charlie?!?!" It said. "Jack!!!!! How are you old buddy?!?!" Charlie said, pleased to see his buddy in shecmes back. "Horrible!!!!!!! There is a mad guy following me!!!!" Jack said. "Who??" "Jack Spicer" Jack said rolling his eyes. "Ah. Him" Zaka said coming into the meeting. "Hey!! Whos this little guy??" Jack said, ruffling Zakas fur. "I'm his son" Zaka said. "Oh really??" Jack said tooken aback. "You gotta son you havnt told me about??" "He is eight" Charlie said. "Oh. Well I shouldnt be here stopping you from getting into your house. "No!!! Come on in" Charlie said. "Oh yeah. Where Davids mum will have a heart attack when she sees a wolf in her hallway" Zaka pointed out. Charlie relized he was right. He couldnt bring a wolf into their house. "Well can I ask your little pippy a questoin? How do ypu know Jack Spicer???" Jack asked Zaka. "Fetch told me about him. Fetch and his bro Retriver were pupnapped by him" Zaka said. "You got the right guy" Jack said nodding his head solemnly. "Uh oh" Zaka said. A big red car came flying around the corner. "Well I gotta literly run. See ya!!!!" Jack said, racing down the street. "GET BACK HERE YOU MUTT!!!!!!!" They heard Jack Spicer yell. "Wow" Zaka said.
Chapter 2. At home
"I'm home" Sasha said. "And guess what?? I saw a poor creture being chased down the road by a big red car!!!" "Oh. That is dads friend" Zaka said. "Really?? Charlie how come I havent met this this mystorious friend of yours???" Sasha said. "Well I havnt seen him in a while until now" Charlie said. "Ah. I see. Well I dropped by at bess's. She had something for Zaka. Here you go darling" Sasha said. She handed Zaka a sweet bone. That is a bone made of suger. "Awsome!!!!!" Zaka said, digging his teeth into it. "Wheres mine???" Charlie said. At first Sasha thought he was joking. "Oh Charlie you kidder you" Sasha said laughing. Charlie put on a solemn face. "You wernt joking???" Sasha said. "No" Charlie said. "Oh Charlie. Dont be a pup" Sasha said shaking her furry head. "But...but but but...." Charlie said. "Listen to mother" Zaka said, with sugar around his mouth. He sblack personed a bit and took another bite from his sugar bone. "Now Itchy was looking to see you and me" Sasha said. "What about me??" Zaka said. "You will stay here with David" Sasha said. "NOOO!!!!" Zaka yelled. "He makes me watch magic tricks with I saw ONE HUNDERD TIMES!!!!!!!!!" "Now it will be one hundered and one" Sasha said solenmly. She strod off. Zaka sat down glumly.
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 19, 2008 16:20:11 GMT -5
I am tired. GOOD NIGHT EVERYBODY!!!!!!!!!! *Waves good bye*
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Post by newshadow777 on Apr 19, 2008 16:54:53 GMT -5
I am tired. GOOD NIGHT EVERYBODY!!!!!!!!!! *Waves good bye* Good night. |
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 20, 2008 5:21:55 GMT -5
Well I am back.
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Post by newshadow777 on Apr 20, 2008 7:05:58 GMT -5
Good morning |
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 20, 2008 8:15:03 GMT -5
Hello. |
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Post by newshadow777 on Apr 20, 2008 8:48:26 GMT -5
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 20, 2008 10:27:09 GMT -5
Whuz up??? |
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Post by newshadow777 on Apr 20, 2008 11:14:34 GMT -5
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 20, 2008 13:57:56 GMT -5
Oook.  |
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Post by newshadow777 on Apr 20, 2008 15:11:05 GMT -5
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 21, 2008 11:44:53 GMT -5
I know. |
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Post by newshadow777 on Apr 21, 2008 16:09:02 GMT -5
I know. You where like -what is he saying- a sec ago lol. |
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Post by wonderdog on Apr 22, 2008 11:54:01 GMT -5
I know. You where like -what is he saying- a sec ago lol. Just needed to say it. |
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