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Post by Mr. Sunshine Whippet on Jul 13, 2004 9:53:50 GMT -5
I'm sure poems could go here, who wants to argue with me about it?.....in RHYME!!! muhahahaha....anyways, I wrote this because I know somebody mostly online, we would never hang out in the world though, I guess we just don't haev a reason to. anyways...: --------------------------
The Online Friend
You've always been my friend, even though you're not really there. You light up my day, when I'm feeling despair.
We never have an argument, I couldn't imagine how. You make me laugh, When you raise your brow.
I'll probably never see you, and it might be better that way. Because we would never agree On a time or a day.
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Post by RebelXD on Jul 15, 2004 0:03:35 GMT -5
I like the poem. Nice job. Is it about anyone we know, I wonder?
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Post by Mr. Sunshine Whippet on Jul 15, 2004 8:33:15 GMT -5
Ehhhh, can't answer that. It kind of applies to all the people I found really nice on the internet and such. I decided to write it because of one person in paticular I know. We talk on MSN and I saw her a few times at school, but we don't really say anything. Out of...3 times? :)We just talk on MSN and that's pretty much it. It still applies to a bunch of other people though .
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Post by Zidane on Jul 22, 2004 10:44:54 GMT -5
Nice poem Shane! I can't write a poem.........if I do, I use the same word like 5 times! O.O O____________O
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Post by Mr. Sunshine Whippet on Jul 22, 2004 10:47:46 GMT -5
Well, usually you do use the same word a lot of times in poems and songs actually. That's why I never liked songs when I was little, they kept repeating it over and over again.
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Post by Zidane on Jul 22, 2004 10:50:22 GMT -5
I guess, but I love songs!
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