|
Post by Soapy on May 23, 2010 20:00:42 GMT -5
Chapter 5? Seriously? Ah well. Better late then never I guess.
And I'm gonna post in the rp as soon as I get rid of this stupid writer's block. I've had it for like 3 days now. It sucks.
Must be the heat. Gonna go down to the beach asap and clear my head. I have more stuff on my mind than I should. I haven't been able to sleep. I'm usually up all night drawing or listening to music or reading or gaming, just waiting for a spark of inspiration. I think I'm rped out.
*dies*
|
|
|
Post by Apples on May 23, 2010 20:06:37 GMT -5
ROTFLMAO so, so random
|
|
|
Post by Soapy on May 23, 2010 23:29:58 GMT -5
I know. That's why I put it. LOL
|
|
|
Post by WonderDog on May 24, 2010 16:47:12 GMT -5
Oh, so just outta interest... when are MY characters showing up? ;D I know that sounds... well... rude... I dunno *shrugs* I'm curious
|
|
|
Post by Charmyte on May 24, 2010 18:58:35 GMT -5
*Refers back to Reference Guide* *Looks closer* *Leaves the room to get a snack* *Eats snack* *States the obvious* *Continues looking*
Chapter 4. For serious. Sorry Soapy (and for some reason, I've wanted to put Soaps and Sopay), it just fits the plot together. But if it makes you feel any better, Soapy and Dante get sort of a "Starring Chapter" of epic proportions.
|
|
|
Post by Soapy on May 24, 2010 20:14:39 GMT -5
Awesomeness!!!
And it's ok
|
|
|
Post by Charmyte on May 27, 2010 13:50:21 GMT -5
Chapter 4 is up! Hurrah! www.fanfiction.net/s/5975627/1/A_Breach_in_the_Clock_DepartmentAnd for covienience, I'll put a link to just my profile, so you can read the most recent version from there without me having to post a new link each time. www.fanfiction.net/~charmyteNotes: Creative Licence, hurray! With each increasing character, it gets harder to descibe all their actions without becoming monotonous. Poppy seriously needs to get a hobby (You'll see).
|
|
|
Post by Apples on May 27, 2010 14:02:53 GMT -5
woo gets better every time (not that it is already good)
|
|
|
Post by Soapy on May 27, 2010 16:03:03 GMT -5
I love this! I can't wait for more!
And yay! Soapy ad Dante appear next!
|
|
|
Post by WonderDog on May 28, 2010 13:34:00 GMT -5
Um... can I just say... You got Britney perfectly? Well done! I love Britney attitude to things! ;D I love how she seems to want nothing to do with Poppy, you've gotten their relationship wrapped up there wonderfully! I'm looking foward to how you do Scott Don't forget, when you do... MEAN MEAN MEEEEEAN! Don't be afraid, make him as heartless as you want (You may wanna check out CharlielovesFlo's fanfics, she got him perfectly.)
|
|
|
Post by Soapy on May 28, 2010 17:09:43 GMT -5
I agree with Wonder. I can't wait to see how you made Soapy and Dante
|
|
|
Post by Charmyte on May 28, 2010 17:16:07 GMT -5
Those two...as of late...are two of the hardest to try and get their characters right! The situation doesn't make it any easier. I'm shifting through profiles and some RPs, I just hope I do as fine a job as I thought I did with Britney and Poppy.
I didn't realize just how well I portrayed them! Thanks, Wonderdog!
|
|
|
Post by Soapy on May 28, 2010 17:18:37 GMT -5
It's okay Charmyte. Please do your best
|
|
|
Post by Charmyte on May 30, 2010 13:31:04 GMT -5
Chapter 5 is now up. I hope I did fine as far as Dante and Soapy's characters, I really just kept looking back and forth at the profiles, trying to recall the RPs...
Notes: The was a massive amount of studying done for accuracy. I rarely ever use characters only once. Shortest Chapter. I get confused. ...And if we've learned anything, alleys are NO GOOD! (You'll see)
|
|
|
Post by Soapy on May 30, 2010 17:24:33 GMT -5
Wow! You got them perfectly! And lol, my favorite Dante line:
"What? My bling? Not a chance. These make me who I am! You want them, pry them off my cold rotting body!"
Also, Soapy doesn't curse or anything. She's too sweet to say 'd**n' and other swear words.
I can so picture him saying that! Hahaha! Also, for future reference he calls girls 'Shawty' or 'Baby' and he calls his pals 'Brothas'
Other than that you made them perfect. I'm impressed.
|
|