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Post by Charmyte on Jun 12, 2010 22:48:15 GMT -5
And it is. Mainly because of a new character. But for reasons (namely being mostly unable to write today, and listening to my newest metal albums >_>), The next chapter will be on a slight delay. Most likely will be out Monday night (oh and how appropriate).
But then I was thinking, taking in nod to Navrex, to keep things fresh and put more than one story at a time. Ados is on hold b/c of a lack in idea material, so it be of three stories taking place before ABitCD.
Either:
I Dub Thee Unforgiven Time: 1940-1945 Plot: In WWII, we see what occurred with Charlie's uncle. Type: Philosphical/Romance/Action/Drama
Bitter Almonds Time: Spring 2010 Plot: Charlie is re-united with an old friend Type: Action/Drama
The Meat Locker Time: Summer 2010 Plot: Zoey and Aric investigate an unusual meat storage. Type: Romance/Action/Drama
Or none, and I continue to only write ABitCL. You all's choice.
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Post by Soapy on Jun 13, 2010 2:19:58 GMT -5
Aw, when are you updating ABitCD?
But hey, I'm looking forward to these all the same.
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Post by Charmyte on Jun 13, 2010 12:53:15 GMT -5
Chapter 8 is 'bout halfway done. More like 60%. As for the other three, it's on you all. If you'd prefer me to only update one story until it is finished, then I will. But if not, then vote for which of three you'd like to see next. They all take place before ABitCD (I love that acronym!), so no continuity error! Yay!
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Post by Charmyte on Jun 13, 2010 22:57:35 GMT -5
Chapter 8 has been submitted. Might be a small while before it's viewable, though.
Notes: 20 points to whoever gets the reference about a certain street. If Poppy were here, in this room, right now, she'd slap me. The majority of the latter half of this chapter was typed while listening to "Fuel" by Metallica. Longest chapter to date. Poor, poor leg. And "Oh God" indeed.
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Post by Navrex on Jun 14, 2010 0:05:59 GMT -5
YAAAYYY!!!! Great job! (As always XD)
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Post by Soapy on Jun 14, 2010 3:40:58 GMT -5
Isn't Gilman Street named after one of the players on the Saints? The name looked familiar. Thought I saw it when I was watching the Superbowl. I forget the guy's first name but 'Gilman' rings a bell.
Earhart also rings a bell. Are they named after Saints players?
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Post by Charmyte on Jun 14, 2010 10:24:14 GMT -5
Earhart was the street on which Dom's Auto Wrecker's is on. Might have been named so, though,
As far as Gilman Street, not really. There might be one somewhere, but that isn't the reference. There's a good reason why Dale might remember it, but no one else....think of his voice....
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Post by Dale on Jun 14, 2010 10:45:16 GMT -5
GILMAN STREET, THAT'S WHERE GREEN DAY'S FIRST GIG WAS! Or at least it had something to do with Green Day. I know my Green Day. Too much. More than Wonder does. Anyway, I like how you made Dale an alcoholic Sorta... not really...? Jeez, I dunno, but it's a good idea! Oh mah Gawd, Dale's a doggy Billie Joe Armstrong! Oh lord, Dale owing money That part made me laugh! Only, I t hink he owes Britney a ton more money than that *rolls eyes* It's the kinda thing he'd do, now espically I'm gonna make him a heavy drinker or... whateves. Woo, roll in the drugs! (Kidding). Anyway, apart from me taking favourtism, I loved that part, as well as part three and five. I'm gonna try and keep track from now one. Chapter eight had to tbe the funniest I read though. Dale's the life of the party (NOT.)
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Post by Charmyte on Jun 14, 2010 17:52:00 GMT -5
Heh, glad you like it. I could have filled the entire chapter with Green Day references and jokes, but I contained myself.
By the way, if you see a "!" where it is obviously a "!?" moment, it is just the way FanFiction handles things. I might go in and remove all "!?"s and make them just "?".
Also, there is a slim chance of an update Wednesday due to a prior planned excursion with family. Sorry
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Post by Charmyte on Jul 1, 2010 18:14:41 GMT -5
www.fanfiction.net/s/5975627/1/A_Breach_in_the_Clock_DepartmentUPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! After WAAAYYY too long, Chapter 9 is UP! Notes: Thanks to the first three pages, Chapter 9 is hereby rated M for strong language. I'll give you three guesses which character is doing most of the swearing... Running gag, yay! I nearly go out of timeframe, and I did at first. I reiterate: I Never EVER make a throwaway character. No detail is pointless, so expect a detail mentioned here to re-appear somewhere else...... Sorry Wonder, I couldn't find Mitch or Ginger's profiles. so....You'll see.
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Post by WonderDog on Jul 2, 2010 2:55:13 GMT -5
I love how you did Scott, Jack and Jimmy! Sheer genious! Oh, that's simple. Ginger is basically a female Scott, only less tough a little. Mitch is a bit like Jack, only he's braver and stronger. Hopefully, that is of some help. Mitch and Jack usually team up. Britney is usually there to team up with Jimmy and Scott and Ginger pair up mostly. Sorry if it isn't enough. I haven't got around to rping Mitch very much and I'm not sure about Ginger because I share her with someone else. Sorta. Oh, I just realized... why would Scott kill Ginger if Ginger is his mate? Maybe she escaped...?
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Post by Charmyte on Jul 2, 2010 10:23:38 GMT -5
Ah,....
I can always fix that bit later. Just a minor humorous thought, it was.
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Post by Soapy on Jul 2, 2010 11:44:14 GMT -5
Finally! You updated!
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Post by Charmyte on Jul 19, 2010 12:02:22 GMT -5
Oi. That is my new favorite word.
Of all the computers I have to use, I have to use my friend's and she doesn't have the program I was writing ABitCD in. Thus, I cannot pull up the file for reading nor editing. Being a fair way through the next chapter, starting it from scratch is not an option.
Sigh.
And the starting drafts for the next two stories are in that format, so can't work on them either! So I'm compensating by writing the fourth story Daemon Æve. There is bound to be a preview soon, so atleast I'm producing something.
Sorry.
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Post by Navrex on Jul 19, 2010 13:37:26 GMT -5
Eeee just do your best Charmyte, no pressure at all
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