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Post by Charmyte on Jun 2, 2010 20:20:25 GMT -5
Chapter 6, UP! www.fanfiction.net/s/5975627/6/A_Breach_in_the_Clock_DepartmentUgh. An off-chapter was inevitable. Forgive me! Notes: Melodramatic Dante is Melodramatic. And annoying. Dante also defies the laws of plotlines. Enthusiastic Mickey is Enthusiastic. And annoying. Mickey also defies the laws of redundancy. I'll think of a Chapter 7 hint when I get close to actually writing it.
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Post by Soapy on Jun 3, 2010 14:59:35 GMT -5
Soapy seems to be on Cloud Nine right now. No pun intended. LOL
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Post by WonderDog on Jun 3, 2010 15:19:17 GMT -5
Once more, you've hit the nail on the head with Britney and Poppy. Can't wait for the next part!
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Post by Charmyte on Jun 3, 2010 16:57:25 GMT -5
Whew, for a moment there, I coulda sworn I saw my ratings plummeting. Also, Chapter 7 will be a bit delayed due to another project that I will running at the same time as my fan fics. An episodic compilation that shall be known as Ados. Mainly just ideas that I get that are too short to make as full fledged fan fictions, but are too good to pass up. That, and I currently have a very thinly veiled plan for Chapter 7
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Post by Soapy on Jun 3, 2010 17:10:18 GMT -5
Aw....I hate waiting. But what is this Ados thingy in which you speak of? Is it another fic or something?
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Post by Charmyte on Jun 3, 2010 18:15:48 GMT -5
Sorta. It stands for All Dogs One Shots. Short little stories (a few chapters long at best) that are just too plain short to be solo stories.
There will be practically zero continuity. I will also be poking fun at real life events and other medias. Like I want to do an *almost* retelling of The Empire Strikes Back's climax if it featured All Dogs charas and OCs. All charas would be credited to their proper owners, of course.
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Post by Harli on Jun 3, 2010 19:38:07 GMT -5
I just finished Chapter 6. Thank you, charmyte, for making me spray soda all over my laptop screen at that last sentence. While I'm cleaning it off, I suppose I should mention that Harli's not overly-prone to profanity, but in that case it was certainly justified. And funny. Melodramatic Dante is amusing. I can only just imagine who's ambushed Mickey.
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Post by Soapy on Jun 4, 2010 3:24:54 GMT -5
Gotta love Dante. Gotta love him. And yes, I agree with Harli, the last sentence made me laugh really hard.
Harli? What do you mean by 'I just finished chapter 6'? Do you have a fic too?
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Post by Harli on Jun 4, 2010 9:02:26 GMT -5
No, I meant I just finished reading Chapter 6. I should've been more specific. Although, I guess it could mean I just got done proof-reading Chapter 6 of Cricket's story for her, but she's not on here, so that's irrelevant.
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Post by Charmyte on Jun 4, 2010 10:11:10 GMT -5
Well, when it came to that kind of scenario (Mickey walking into the street and promptly getting struck down), first time there was genuine shock. But second time, it'd feel just slightly redundant. And so Harli, who'd be the only one of group A as I call them to know about the first event in detail, fit the bill.
And about what that line did for Harli, that is more or less the reason why I don't drink when I read. Anything. Sorry. ;D
EDIT/NOTICE: I have changed the credit system. Instead of all characters being announced up front, their respective credit is displayed in the chapters they appear. This is for ease of access, and to limit any possible spoilers for upcoming characters to a new reader.
Chapter 7 is planned to be added Wednesday.
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Post by Charmyte on Jun 9, 2010 15:17:02 GMT -5
Honestly, for real this time: Chapter 7 www.fanfiction.net/s/5975627/1/A_Breach_in_the_Clock_Department*nyyyyyaaaaaaaaoooooowwwwww* You hear that? That's the sound of my ratings plummeting. I can just sense it... Notes: No one cares for Crystal. Cloke Sinare is a very random spell. Husky to the rescue! I rarely ever make a throw-away character.
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Post by Soapy on Jun 9, 2010 15:53:40 GMT -5
Finally! I've been dying to read chapter 7
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Post by WonderDog on Jun 10, 2010 11:21:36 GMT -5
*Steals the "random, pointless information with a smile" line and runs* I loved that line, it got a smile out of me It takes a lot for a written piece to even make me raise an eyebrow. It suits Britney so much! I really do see that line in a rp *points at you accusingly* THAT WAS NOT BAD! In fact, I loved that chapter! Keep up the good work, you seem to be improving on each chapter if not maintaining your brilliant skill ;D From great to excellent. Looking foward to more!
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Post by Charmyte on Jun 10, 2010 13:47:07 GMT -5
Thanks. And well, your chara did say it, so technically, it always belonged to you. Strange, isn't it?
I'm finally looking forward to the next few chapters. Chapters 9/10 were one of the first major points I made for the story. First would be the first chapter (back when this was going to be a RP), then a demo of the fight in the 2nd chapter.And I'm actually starting to make a Futurecast of sorts to organize upcoming chapters. So much so, I can actually make a hint for the next chapter/
Chapter 8 Hint: Are you ready for some Footbaaaaaall!!!!!!!!!!!?
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Post by Soapy on Jun 10, 2010 13:55:12 GMT -5
Football? Sounds interesting
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