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Post by Harli on May 30, 2010 17:52:10 GMT -5
Gah! How did I miss this? I'd blame it on memory loss, but I'm a little too young for that so I guess I'll blame it on... blond hair. Yeah, that's it.
"She's very reliable. A bit clumsy at times-" "How clumsy?" "She once set a box of firecrackers on fire while rummaging through trash." "Oh yeah, very reliable."
*snerk* She's done worse, believe me. It wouldn't have surprised me a bit if she'd blown something up at the end of the chapter. You've nailed her perfectly, right down to her non-expertness of Heaven. Harletta Barkers might believe in Heaven, but she doesn't know diddly-squat about its inner workings. My one gripe is that Harli is grayish-blue not blackish-red, but that's a minor quibble. On to Chapter 5! And thence to wait impatiently for Chapter 6!
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Post by Charmyte on May 30, 2010 18:02:38 GMT -5
Also, Soapy doesn't curse or anything. She's too sweet to say 'd**n' and other swear words. It was purely for the sake of being able to reference Planet of the Apes. But I'll remember that. To Harli: Oh yes, it would appear I got your colors messed up. *sigh* And my streak was going on so long, too! Hopefully Chapter 6 will be out by Tuesday, but I'm slowly trying two make it a Weekend-Wednesday update schedule.
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Post by Charmyte on May 30, 2010 22:14:35 GMT -5
Well it seems I've at long last got a review from a FanFiction.net user...
...Who seems suspiciously like someone on the board....
Ah, it's most likely coincidence. I...I hope. Oh well, Crickets and Kit-Kats.
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Post by Harli on May 30, 2010 22:26:14 GMT -5
Wishfull thinking, mein Freund. I sent Cricket a message telling her to get her mangy tail over there and review it since she has a FanFiction.net account and is, therefore, able to leave such a review. She didn't say anything offensive, did she? Twitchy-tailed little rodent chaser. I'm surprised she actually listened to me. Don't feel bad about messing Harli's color up. Like I said, it's a minor quibble.
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Post by Soapy on May 30, 2010 22:38:10 GMT -5
Ah. I see. I can't wait till chapter 6 either. How long are you gonna make this? And also, do you have any plans for future fics? *holds out a mic like a news reporter* And how does setting off fireworks accidentally make someone reliable? Please explain. That part made me giggle.
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Post by Charmyte on May 31, 2010 9:32:48 GMT -5
Ah, okay. Just seemed uncannily like someone here. And I have several more ideas just waiting to be written. Such As: Zoey and Aric with spiritual findings...( The Meat Locker) Charlie's Uncle in the heat of WWII...( I Dub Thee, Unforgiven) A Murderer in New Orleans with a friend in need...( Three For One) Eddie dealing with the day that never ends...( The Epicenter) Charlie meeting up with the strangest of friends...( Bitter Almonds) And more. But first...I have to finish the first story!
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Post by Soapy on May 31, 2010 9:51:02 GMT -5
Sweet! I can't wait!
Get writing Charmyte!
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Post by WonderDog on May 31, 2010 16:16:33 GMT -5
Ooooh, interesting! I can't wait to see how you pull it all off! Hmmmm... all this seems to make me want to write a NEW fanfic. I just might do that. But anyway, can't wait for the next part!
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Post by Soapy on May 31, 2010 21:01:31 GMT -5
Hmmm....I think I will too.....gotta figure out what to write though. I'm pretty brain dead from all the rping I've been doing and character bios I've been working on.
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Post by Dale on Jun 1, 2010 13:26:42 GMT -5
Well, I like it It's good so far. Eh. You've already given Dale a mention, you may well go ahead and use him if you wanna *shrug* I don't mind, I'd like to see if you master him just as well If you do, remember. CLUTZY CLUTZY CLUTZY. The one word that sums up Dale perfectly.
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Post by Soapy on Jun 1, 2010 14:18:30 GMT -5
I still gotta see if you can master Soapy and Dante. So far so good but one chapter isn't enough to decide.
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Post by Charmyte on Jun 1, 2010 15:14:24 GMT -5
The next....2 or so chapters will most likely be the worst thus far. I just didn't smoothen out the rough edges beforehand, and now I'm paying for it.
As far as Dale, if I can find a way in the foreseeable future to fit him into the plot, I just might. I need to begin the Charlie/Crystal character development in the upcoming chapters.
Just to give some more anticipation for the lesser (personally) anticipated chapters:
Hint For Next Chapter: Charlie doesn't do "Subtle" very well.
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Post by Soapy on Jun 1, 2010 20:34:18 GMT -5
Is Crystal gonna come out and tell Charlie about what she did and then instead of being the 'subtle guardian angel' he just flat out says that he IS one and attack her without hearing about Crystal's 'bipolar' thing?
Just a guess
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Post by Charmyte on Jun 1, 2010 20:58:30 GMT -5
Just to let you know, the hint is directed towards something completely different, but I like your thinking.
Ow. Wrists hurt. Chapter 6 WILL be up tomorrow. Promise.
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Post by Soapy on Jun 1, 2010 21:50:37 GMT -5
It better be! I'm loving this fic
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